Richard Lamoureux-For Contest

Richard Lamoureux-figured out

Richard Lamoureux,
even his name speaks of love.

The LOST AND FOUND kind of love
The kind of love that can contemplate
THE EDITING OF ME.

Richard is a true realist, never MINCING WORDS,
he says it like it is, but with a kind manner.

He is LISTENING FOR A CHANGE, because that
is what BEING HUMAN is all about, 
and that's what he does best.

HIS HUNGER is for truth and justice,
with a little SWEET SCOUNDREL LIES,
thrown in the mix.

WHAT YOU DON'T SEE in his words,
are THE LOVELY BONES, RUNNING AT THE SPEED OF LIFE!

Richard wants to CHANGE THE WORLD, and the key he has,
IMBEDDED IN PAGES, so it's a little hard to find.

Richard always asks WHERE DO POETS GO?
I don't know where he is now, 
but I DO know he was, on the SKYTRAIN,
BUT HE'S NOT SHOPPING.
I know, because he came home with a CUP OF EMPTY,
maybe that's how he knows that BIG GIRLS DO CRY!

Richard and I share similar backgrounds, 
and we yearn for the same things, 
a fathers love for example. 

We, KEEP TRYING TO REACH
BEYOND WHAT WE HAVE REACHED, 
TRYING TO GRASP THE MAGNIFICENT.

If we keep trying, Richard, maybe there will be 
LIGHT SUSPENDED, ABOVE FOREVER, for us.


October 16,2016
Got you figured out contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 6:17 AM
Congrats, John!
Hamilton Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Kim
Poteet Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Excellent work, John. Creative use of Richard's titles incorporated into his weltanschauung. Congratulations on the top placement.
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Reason
Milliner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved Win!!
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Sarita
Kimathi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Congrats John, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:22 AM
Thanks Teddy
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Hi John, I see why this clever written poem is in the top spot. Great tribute. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Daniel Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 12:08 AM
I told you, John:) this one's simply amazing:) congratulations on your top well deserved win:)
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Jo
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 7:09 PM
so clever to use the titles interwoven into your poem John:-) congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Jan
La France Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 5:54 PM
John congratulations on your win in the contest with this great tribute to Rick ~
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Constance
Roper Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, good job discribing Richard. Hugs
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Eve.
Sands Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Awesome! Congratulations!! :)
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Heidi
White Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 10:57 AM
This is just wonderful!! Congratulations on 1st place :)
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Thanks Darren
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 10:21 AM
I am beyond impressed, I was happy to see your name. Congratulations on top placement.
Hamilton Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Thanks Richard, this was an easy one for me, feels like I've known you for years. Your poetry is a reflection of who you are so who better to describe you than you! Glad you liked it!
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:37 PM
John, this is great how you did this contest and you did indeed capture his essence through the clever use of titles! Richard should love this. I came to your poems looking for an example of your ten words, but don't know which poem it would be. Anyway, I enjoyed finding this one, for Richard is one of the most wonderful people here at Soup.
Hamilton Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Thanks Andrea, it's "the one that got away" poem for the contest.
Daniel Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Perfect, John:) how clever of you to use his own words!!! This one is a winner, for sure:)
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Not sure but thanks!
Smith Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Great use of the titles John. You did Richard justice.
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Thanks Tim.
Dalei Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:02 PM
A great write. Unique presentation of literature with ur own style. Richard will definitely feel happy. A big 7 from me..............//hugs
Hamilton Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Thanks Manmath for your visit and comment, much appreciated.
P  Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 4:07 AM
From what I've read of Richard and through his reviews, by jove, I think you've got it old chap. :) Good luck in the contest.
Hamilton Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Thanks Paloma
Turner Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Perfect!!!! John, this is fantastic!
Hamilton Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Thanks Daniel, his own words reflect who he is!
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