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Ribbons and Roses

I've never seen you so beautiful I'm truly overwhelmed With that fixed smile on your face and a touch of blush on your cheeks I would swear you're happy if I didn't know better But I must confess that I fancy this dress well chosen was it for this special occasion and the scent of pink rose tickles my nose along with the soft touch of lavender ribbons A sight such as this leaves me torn and conflicted uncertain whether to be happy or sad its your day after all and you look so stunning so relaxed so alive its a pleasant change from the usual you People take pictures and say you look divine but you prefer baggy jeans and torn clothes I wonder if they know this as your here in our sight dressed with ribbons and roses This is your day so I won't make a scene just a kiss on your cheeks and I'll wish you the best then I'll continue my journey and leave you to rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/28/2017 7:48:00 PM
You are a good story teller. An enjoyable read.
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Sean Solomon
Date: 12/28/2017 7:56:00 PM
Yes, I do love a good story
Date: 12/20/2017 4:15:00 PM
The ending was such a shock. I reread to truly grasp each word. Fantastic! I'm new, but will follow you.
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Sean Solomon
Date: 12/21/2017 10:36:00 AM
:) written to intrigue and mislead..lol I'm glad you liked it..
Date: 12/7/2017 8:43:00 AM
great job sean love this
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Sean Solomon
Date: 12/7/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thanks pretty Lady...
Date: 12/6/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you for this beautiful and touching poem.
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Sean Solomon
Date: 12/6/2017 5:43:00 PM
I am glad you liked it! :)

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