Ribbitt

There once were three magical pigs.
They were neighbors that danced the jig.
The wolf in the valley
Sometimes walked down their alley.
He was hungry for one of those pigs!

Pig-one lived in a house made of straw.
He looked at his walls with great awe.
At night he would nibble
His saliva would dribble.
He often ate straw from his wall.

The second pig had a house made of sticks.
He built it without magical tricks.
And although it was rare,
He nibbled sticks there.
Until piggy-two became sick…very sick.

At night he would scream for ice cream!”
An unusual request so it seems.
It annoyed piggy one 
Who waved his magic wand! 
Sweet corn on pig two’s wall”, he schemed.

The third pig built a house of bricks.
Bricks are much stronger than sticks.
So, try as he might, 
He could not nibble at night.
So, he practiced his jig just for kicks.

Their neighbor, the alley-walking wolf,
Snuck around one night, never saying, “Woof!”
He went to the first pig’s house.
He acted like a lousy louse.
A zip of the wand; the bad wolf was gone.  Poof!  

Piggy-one ran to tell pig-two and pig-three.
You’ll never believe the sight he did see.
Pig-two and the wolf had a cup
Ice cream they swallowed all up.
How in the world could this be?

The wolf was still hungry; that was bad.
Roast pig was the best option that he had.
When he lunged at those two,
Through the air he flew.
Pig three waved his wand three pigs were glad.

Pig-three had been watching them there.
Unlikely friends at an ice cream affair
The skinniest of the pigs,
Started dancing pig jigs.
Because he ended that wolf with great flare.

A “Ribbitt” instead of a growl,
That wolf will never more howl.
Three magical pigs…
Spend their nights doing jigs.
No longer fearing the wolf’s angry growl.


Inspired by the store of the Three Little Pigs:  
Written for Johyn Heck's "Happily Ever After" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 2, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Dane, .. it is nice to read this oldie and goody bunch of limericks. :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, in the "Happily Ever After" contest.. always~ PD
La France Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, with this whimsical and enchanting redo of the classic story of the three little pigs, what an "imagination" you have ~~
Onclaud Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:18 AM
happy cheers on your win, dane. what a whooper!.. huggs, nette
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December 30, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Johnson Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great fairy tale ending. Love, Joyce
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December 30, 2010 at 8:35 AM
This is so cute, Dane. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Adeite Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest, you are such a creative poet. Please keep your creative caps on and let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with paints of passion. Enjoy the honor as I wish you many more. Love always, Adeleke
Mehta Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved second place win in the contest of John, Dane
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December 30, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your super win in John's contest with this awesome entry my friend... totally entertaining write... enjoy with luv and u do know u won in my TOYLAND contest too but the system will not allow winners list to post for 2011 if the contest had a New Year deadline... but I did create a blog listing the winners so congrats and H.N.Y too..
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your placement Dane Ann in John Heck's contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Many congratulations for this well deserved win Dane. A very happy New year to you and your Family.
Mehta Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 7:52 AM
very frolicsome, witty and enjoyable write , Dane
Onclaud Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 7:26 AM
laughing gas, dane... humor and wit at its heights, my imagination about pigs part 2 soars.. this is in my winner's list; much luck to you!! huggs, nette
Goff Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Dane Ann! great work! 2/3 & 5 are my favorites! had me chucklin!!! jimbo
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