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Rhymed Hiku

a bird sweetly tweeting the world still and quiet- cat meows a greeting ______________ May 11, 2023 Poetry/Haiku/Rhymed Hiku Copyright Protected, ID 05-1546-614-11 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere No 1216 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/14/2023 Seventh Place

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/15/2023 6:31:00 AM
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Back with congrats on this winner. That bird does not know what is store for him. Sad day for the bird. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2023 7:32:00 AM
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Sara, thank you so much for the congrats, and comment, I think the bird just flew away !
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Sotto Poet
Date: 5/14/2023 4:05:00 AM
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A lovely crafted hiku, Constance, I like the rhyming as well. Congratulations on your contest win. This is a fave for its creativity
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 7:37:00 AM
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Sotto, thank you so much for your kind comment, compliment and congratulations and for the FAV !
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 5/14/2023 2:25:00 AM
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Lovely, congratulations, Constance:)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 7:38:00 AM
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Jo, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 5/13/2023 11:07:00 PM
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A ryhming, and sweetly charming Haiku, I love this merry little gem <3
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 7:38:00 AM
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BJ, thank you so much for the nice compliment !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/11/2023 12:57:00 PM
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Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2023 3:22:00 PM
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Sara, thank you so much for the encouragement and comment !

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