Rhymed Hiku



a bird sweetly tweeting
the world still and quiet-
cat meows a greeting

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May 11, 2023


Poetry/Haiku/Rhymed Hiku
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1546-614-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere No 1216
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/14/2023

Seventh Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Back with congrats on this winner. That bird does not know what is store for him. Sad day for the bird. Sara
La France Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Sara, thank you so much for the congrats, and comment, I think the bird just flew away !
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 4:05 AM
A lovely crafted hiku, Constance, I like the rhyming as well. Congratulations on your contest win. This is a fave for its creativity
La France Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for your kind comment, compliment and congratulations and for the FAV !
Daniel Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 2:25 AM
Lovely, congratulations, Constance:)
La France Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 11:07 PM
A ryhming, and sweetly charming Haiku, I love this merry little gem <3
La France Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:38 AM
BJ, thank you so much for the nice compliment !
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 12:57 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
La France Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 3:22 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the encouragement and comment !
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