Home » Poems » Constance La France » Rhymed Hiku

Rhymed Hiku

a bird sweetly tweeting the world still and quiet- cat meows a greeting ______________ May 11, 2023 Poetry/Haiku/Rhymed Hiku Copyright Protected, ID 05-1546-614-11 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere No 1216 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/14/2023 Seventh Place

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2023 6:31:00 AM

Back with congrats on this winner. That bird does not know what is store for him. Sad day for the bird. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2023 7:32:00 AM

Sara, thank you so much for the congrats, and comment, I think the bird just flew away !

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/14/2023 4:05:00 AM

A lovely crafted hiku, Constance, I like the rhyming as well. Congratulations on your contest win. This is a fave for its creativity

Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 7:37:00 AM

Sotto, thank you so much for your kind comment, compliment and congratulations and for the FAV !

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/14/2023 2:25:00 AM

Lovely, congratulations, Constance:)

Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 7:38:00 AM

Jo, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/13/2023 11:07:00 PM

A ryhming, and sweetly charming Haiku, I love this merry little gem <3

Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2023 7:38:00 AM

BJ, thank you so much for the nice compliment !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2023 12:57:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2023 3:22:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the encouragement and comment !