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In my dream- I am walking through the frozen snow, past snow drifts like swans asleep in wintry meadows; drifting in the cold is the song of a little sparrow, then many are singing like the low wails of a violin. The wind is whispering as the snowflakes begin, like gauzy curtains of infinite white they spin; and in this winter storm I am lost within, I raise my hands for the filigree flakes like lace. The snowflakes soft as a lover's kiss on my face, all through the forest the snow and trees embrace; a winter scene before me where all things interlace, crystalline ice drips from branches like diamonds. I lay myself down to sleep in winter woodlands, dreaming, dreaming of trees with festive garlands; and birds of color like Christmas balls by the thousands, I gasp for breath in the frosty, frigid bitter air. It is time to leave this ice-kissed dream- oh tear, oh, I wish for a warm coat not a gown threadbare; and now the snowflakes are falling, falling everywhere, in my dream- I am walking through the frozen snow. ________________________ December 4, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/Winter Copyright Protected, ID 17-9686-92-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Rhyme Time III sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 12/26/2017 11:15:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/25/2017 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, BW.
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Date: 12/25/2017 7:57:00 PM
Nicely done and very beautiful, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win! Merry Christmas and God Bless Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/25/2017 5:22:00 PM
such gorgeous imagery I especially love the third stanza the picture is so lovely. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/25/2017 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear!
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Date: 12/25/2017 10:49:00 AM
ooooh! I can smell the scent of ivory snow in the air! Beautiful imagery and beautiful poem sweet Broken Wings! ( I haven't checked my soupie lately, give me a day or so- hugs) thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 12/19/2017 11:50:00 AM
Love this BW!!! Your accompanying pictures are always so intruiging! You have such a wonderful way with words and amazing imagery!!!! Really enjoyed this one :) ~ Judy
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Date: 12/6/2017 9:27:00 AM
I love this one, interlaced with all things white and lovely, a splendid dream, Constance:)
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Date: 12/5/2017 6:58:00 AM
Well written BW--dreaming of winter and snow--apt imagery!
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