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Rhapsody of Sweet Home

H azily, as nightfall glides ,I unlock the front-gate
O verwrought from drills of a riddled job, 
M y toes stumble on scented violet buds 
E nhancing  gripped thoughts to drip-drop away.

S omehow, Mom’s roast chicken trails along
W here piano notes soften the blues… and there,
E merging through a hall; Oh Granpa appears
E ager to spend a ritual of my life’s rhapsody;
T urning my drones into an abode’s breezy song.

H eartfelt jousts ring  to nourish time’s warmth,
O ften soothing an outer world, restless… yet this
M erriment flames brightly in this safe refuge,
E ver precious as restful chants of heaven’s lyre.


2/3/2016
Contest: Home Sweet Home Acrostic
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hamilton Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Belated congrats Nette always a pleasure to read you. Thanks for your lovely entry.
Lane Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:35 AM
A wonderful acrostic, Nette. Congrats on your placement...love the photo.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:59 AM
I love your entry Nette. Congratulations on your win my friend!
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Wonderful write, Nette!!! Congratulations on your "Home sweet home-Acrostic" win. :) Hugs, Eve
Scars Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Sweet and lovely Nette, congrats on your placement! *Smiles* -luloo :)
A   Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Nette, Congrats on your "Home sweet home-Acrostic" LINDA
Martin Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Wow! Luck in contesr.
Godwin Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Ghost-trails of love comfy the home for they echo the heart still beating and those gone quiet. I love the sentiment in your Acrostic ... CayCay
Adams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:08 AM
your pen always seems to lace such beauty through your poems...this piece is as i remember your writings, so beautifully penned! One can feel the warmth of your cozy home!
La France Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:24 PM
nette, so beautifully penned, full of the love of family and home, I love this so much, well done ~
Dillenbeck Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:04 PM
Sounds delicious. May we be as you say.
Delaney Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:04 PM
All the beautiful things that make us love home. Really enjoyed this one. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:57 PM
This is filled with such warmth and closeness of family. A wonderful entry Nette. I am sure it will be a top winner. #7 from me.
Dunn Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Dear Nette Love the emotional feeling in this work, so full of warmth inspirational on the home front style of family, friends and what totally makes up a home, a home, great job my young friend, and thanks for your review on my mid-evil poem, hey you take care and enjoy the weekend coming up, cheri
Bordner Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:42 PM
The home of your heart welcomes the songs of trusted spirit, and I really like how you place a touch of simple beauty in your comfy refuge, the violets, the scents, the blues of innocent moods, the rituals of family, and the music of heaven's supervision Nette...J.A.B.
Beaufort Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:15 PM
You have a charming way of making it seem quite sweet. So may all your days be pleasant ones! It is such a pleasure reading your HSH and some of the others. Yours has a style all its own. More smiles bring you to me.
Parker Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 5:54 PM
Your piano looks like parts of my house, my wife who is Spanish has family portraits in groups just like yours/ like a shrine/ my family keeps ours in books..maybe the Scottish in me..lovely poem my friend..good luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:13 PM
- Sounds like a lovely home to come home to, Nette - Beautiful written - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sabre Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:19 PM
This reminds of the song, " Home" and your exhilarating poem moves me to be thankful for having a sweet haven!
Muzzey Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Nette, you have written a beautiful poem that speaks to me of my childhood living with my grandparents. I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest~ Caryl
Ongado Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Magical poetry. Work is a pressure cooker, and the familiar aroma, floral sightings, banter are the sweet music for a tired soul! This is a home I like to reside in!
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Such a beautiful flow to your acrostic Nette and lovely imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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