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Rhapsody of My Heart

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dear heart life not always bluebirds & butterflies at times slate grey & bruised skies never let heart grow cold or dreams grow old or bitterness consume bloom dear heart bloom let change wash you open heart & open mind cleanse of past a firefly carrying brunt of daylight spinning in sacrosanct realm weaves dreams hibernate hiding from ache of waking soon send slumbering sweet symphony vibrating with colors & tenderly heaping with empathy sighs & whispers may muses rise in love & poetry Written: February 06, 2023 Your Preference Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 2/8/2023 7:49:00 PM
Lovely rhapsody, Sotto, you have become quite the master of this form, congratulations:)
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Date: 2/8/2023 11:19:00 AM
A truly beautiful Open Form Lasaad. The shape flows brilliantly with your words. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/8/2023 7:58:00 AM
Wow... this is so lovely ! I must say excellent ..... ! Beautiful thoughts flowing zig zag like a stream coming down from a mountain ! Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 2/7/2023 6:01:00 AM
Joy of the heart--wonderful poem, my friend. Win, BIG!
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Date: 2/6/2023 4:20:00 PM
That's amazing, what a gift , love it, very great inspiration and flowing pattern
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