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Date: 3/3/2016 7:28:00 PM
This is featured on the home page...great to read it again : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/4/2016 7:34:00 AM
Oh thats why I had some visits on it..lol : ) Many thanks Timu
Date: 2/29/2016 3:42:00 PM
Love your love song. daver
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Date: 2/29/2016 2:34:00 PM
Lovely piece Charmaine, great imagery and flow, really enjoyed it!
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Date: 2/29/2016 2:21:00 PM
A nice combination of nature, and sensuality. Thank you for the read, an excellent poem. Tango.
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Date: 2/29/2016 11:51:00 AM
I like this poem and style a lot.
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:12:00 AM
So ambient, Charmaine. You gave the island and sea such human voices painted with colorful imagery. Excellent work! And thanks for visiting earlier. I've missed out on a lot on the Soup and am happy to be catching up with my friends after a year long absence...
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Date: 10/2/2014 2:15:00 AM
Powerfully penned. The words really moved me like the waves of the endless sea. :D
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Date: 10/1/2014 3:01:00 AM
I am always blown away by these particular writes of yours. You have a unique style and you own it.
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Date: 9/30/2014 2:07:00 PM
The last few lines are simply magnetic, as most of your verse is Charmaine. Always a joy to read, and the images your words paint are breathless, James :)
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:45:00 PM
now that charmaine dear friend truly excellent pen very beautifully painted piece
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:13:00 PM
Very beautiful and enchanting, Charmaine. Your shores....any man would love to visit. Hugs
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:06:00 PM
Do you use a paintbrush to write your poems? :)...... More than excellent, more than passionate, more like a masterpiece!
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Date: 9/29/2014 1:50:00 PM
An island anyone would want to call their home...sweet and loving Charma......hugs Tim
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Date: 9/29/2014 12:19:00 PM
ditto with Anne, Beautiful :) eve
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Date: 9/29/2014 11:43:00 AM
- A beautiful picture with your words and passion Charmaine !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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