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A quick scribble for Edward Ibeh's This or That volume 27 poetry contest.

 

You are an enigma, only found hidden under leaves. A colour in the rainbow still unseen. Fate has formed your mind into a revolving door, without pressing the buttons, it remains like dead seeds, so I became your gardener to help you blossom - perceiving you will flourish into the rarest rose. Only you can soothe me from your thorns. You are a sleeping volcano, sometimes senseless, irritated by every polish to regain consciousness. When embers ignite within your enraged eyes, fragile flames spiral into bitter bonfires - visible from scorching scars on my soul. I always wonder is this the last time I adorn my armour, as I follow you into your internal inferno, hoping your fulvous frenzies are temporary like the last star. You are a master in your art, but I'm an alchemist with your secret ingredients, so I tug your strings in reverse, but never leave you dangling in a disorderly drunkard manner, because you are a unique, untouched gem. Words are vortex to your heart, so I summon silence to keep you on the edge, but before you fall, I'm there to catch you. You insist it's ebony, when it's ivory, so I tell you to go left, knowing you will go right and when you say you cannot write, I Whisper secrets to the wind, aware they'll carry to you like a typhoon. As you vent, your metaphors manifest the honesty behind the poison in your veins. Suppressed emotions become poetry. When you imply, I do not feel and you are hellbent to hurt, your wrath leaves me hanging like a punch bag, yet I never aim back, knowing calmness heals. I can tell you it's the final spring, or I've laid down my shield and sword, but you are unable to halt the slaughter, until the sour aftertaste becomes pleasant, so I place sugar cubes, slowly on your tongue. I was born to take the stones out of your heart. In this cognitive warfare of intellect and logic, where you push and I pull, there is only one winner, no sinner, as in your quest to prove me wrong, you succeed and that my love is reverse psychology.

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Date: 11/11/2024 1:57:00 PM
Fascinating poem. It seems to losing is winning.
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Date: 9/27/2024 5:28:00 AM
Outstanding write, as usual, SO. An instant fave! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 9/16/2024 9:10:00 AM
A very powerful write. Relationships are sometimes strained and need compassion, understanding and communication which you so eloquently use your reverse psychology to tell us of your unique 'untouched gem', your love, your 'cognitive warfare of intellect and logic' within which she pushes and you pull, 'there is only one winner, no sinner.' 'You are an enigma, only found hidden under leaves'- 'so I became your gardener to help you blossom'. But 'in your quest to prove me wrong, you succeed and that my love is reverse psychology'. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/15/2024 6:27:00 AM
Wow! This is a masterful write from a very talented poet like you my dearest poet friend SO. I love every line and stanza of it and the whole poem is outstanding. You're also a great pyscholigist I'm sure. A winner for me. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 9/15/2024 4:19:00 AM
This poem of yours dear S1, beautifully captures a dynamic of deep admiration and subtle influence. You the poet that you are, acknowledges the other person’s mastery and uniqueness, yet reveals an intimate knowledge of their hidden qualities. There's a delicate balance of power, as you gently guide without causing chaos, showing care and respect for someone you see as a rare and precious gem. You don't need luck, you have a Winner in my humble opinion...Hugs
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Date: 9/13/2024 3:21:00 AM
A lover who knows how to treat a difficult person. Great psychology. This is a wonderful poem, and kudos to you for writing this so quickly. Brilliant write.
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Date: 9/12/2024 12:20:00 PM
Great piece. Powerful pen. Wonderful imagery with nice rhythm and flow. It has an element of the surreal. Enjoyed immensely. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 9/12/2024 10:24:00 AM
A thoughtful oem with wonderful imagery. i hope i can write like you some day.
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Date: 9/12/2024 5:20:00 AM
Dear SO, I loved how you painted the contentious, complex and challenging relationship of two individuals. Yet you also bring out the commitment, the healing, and the understanding that are so true of many relationships that mean something. Being a person who has been the punching bag once I loved these lines. "When you imply, I do not feel and you are hellbent to hurt, your wrath leaves me hanging like a punch bag, yet I never aim back, knowing calmness heals." Well Inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/11/2024 11:54:00 PM
"Words are vortex to your heart, so I summon silence to keep you on the edge, but before you fall, I'm there to catch you." How chivalrous you are, dear Silent One. Like a medieval knight, you are there to protect the lady from all danger. For you it is not duty, but pleasure. Your reverse psychology will definitely prove effective and one day you 'll win this 'untouched gem.' :) "I Whisper secrets to the wind, aware they'll carry to you like a typhoon. As you vent, your metaphors manifest the honesty behind the poison in your veins. Suppressed emotions become poetry." Powerful like the typhoon.
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Date: 9/11/2024 7:42:00 PM
Wonderful poetry my friend. Very thoughtful, creative writing. For every action, there is a counter action...so it is, in our world of cause and effect -- be the cause and effect of one another, seeking a middle ground balance, if both hang in there long enough, can evolve into true love.
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Date: 9/11/2024 4:25:00 PM
Deep thinking, you're using your logic to me! Your emotions make for a very sensitive poetry....
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Date: 9/11/2024 4:05:00 PM
awakening the metaphors as they spew like a volcano. Very nicely penned
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Date: 9/11/2024 1:32:00 PM
Good lord silent one! This took me on an emotional rollercoaster! I am speechless! I found this prompt a bit hard to write for but as always youv shown us all how its done! In the most soul hitting manner! Youv depicted reverse psychology so well and looks like youv understood what it is so well and how it can be used when in a toxic relationship! Im sure this is fictional however it seems so real, and in this poem the character struggling in this relationship seems to see beauty in their partner amidst everything else!
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Date: 9/11/2024 1:40:00 PM
Like this! “ You insist it's ebony, when it's ivory,” lol its not even funny how some just would go to all the extremes to argue and try to prove one that they are wrong! This lady in this poem really needs help! So real how you’ve written! “ I was born to take the stones out of your heart. In this cognitive warfare of intellect and logic, where you push and I pull, there is only one winner, no sinner,” my heart! Love this! A poem definitely that fits mental health, too! Perfect textbook definition of reverse psychology! Fave it is! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/11/2024 1:39:00 PM
“ I can tell you it's the final spring, or I've laid down my shield and sword, but you are unable to halt the slaughter,” these lines made really sad as i can feel the helplessness behind those words! And my heart hurts for so many men out there enduring so much in silence: and the ending is very touching! Your use of metaphors similes and also alliterations and how you’ve written such a descriptive poem is beyond impeccable! Only you can do it!
Date: 9/11/2024 1:09:00 PM
You always do such wonderful imagery. Good luck in contest.
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