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Barbara Gorelick

Reverie

Night
Alone
Time to think
Cold hands and heart
The velvet darkness keeping her secrets…..



Subject..The Automat by Edward Hopper

For Brian's contest

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2009

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 24, 2009 at 4:58 AM

Congratulations, Barbara, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest. Your creativity shines. Smiles, Dane Ann

October 23, 2009 at 1:24 PM

There is so much depth in this poem. Love the last line. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful weekend! Karen

Brandee Augustus

October 19, 2009 at 12:55 PM

I really like this, especially your last line! Very nice! Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest.

October 19, 2009 at 5:48 AM

Congratulations for your WIN in Brians' contest, Barbara! Beautiful poetry! Love, Robin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 18, 2009 at 7:15 PM

Dear Barbara, I've seen the Painting so I know YOUR not talking about YOU with cold hands and Heart Good Luck ALWAYS YOURS... HG

Carrie Richards

October 18, 2009 at 9:01 AM

Well done Barbara! Congratulations on this win in Brian's contest!~ Love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 18, 2009 at 6:21 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

October 18, 2009 at 1:16 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest BG.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open.

October 15, 2009 at 11:38 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Barbara.Rgds Brian

October 15, 2009 at 3:57 PM

Good luck in the contest. Interesting take on the picture for one picture to give so many ideas is amazing. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 15, 2009 at 2:06 PM

Wishing you the best in Brian's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

October 15, 2009 at 1:31 PM

Lovely poem Barbara, best of luck in Brian's contest >> James

October 15, 2009 at 12:55 PM

This is nice Barbara...Good luck in the contest...Marty

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