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Reverberations Premiere Contest Winner

Reverberations Moist, heavy air settled upon my skin tauntingly teasing undulating hair. Reaching out I clutch at the mocking wind as its fading coolness flees into cloud my tongue tasting the torment of the air inhaling brimstone scented vibration roiling within a billowing terror striking in a blinding flash of fury trembling as reverberations thunder through the cornerstones of my DNA heart racing to escape a dormant fear the percussive aftermath of lightning’s arc. Stillness becalmed on hope’s sporadic breath exhaled within the darkness of a cloud. ©2/14/2018 submitted to – Describe a thunder storm without the sense of sound – Poetry Contest sponsor – Brenda Chiri

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Date: 3/5/2018 8:06:00 AM
Back with CONGRATULATIONS! I knew it was wonderful :) xomo!
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Date: 3/5/2018 3:58:00 AM
A wonderful trophy for your efforts with this excellent piece John. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 3/4/2018 3:43:00 PM
ew la la well deserved Congrats
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Date: 3/4/2018 2:16:00 PM
Two gold trophies in one week. Wonderful and many congratulations to you. Love the blank verse form you have used in this piece.
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Date: 3/3/2018 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery made me feel every line...
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:34:00 PM
Yes........number 1 in the contest! Well deserved John !! Great job using all the other senses without the sound 'effects' !
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:49:00 PM
Yes, John, I agree with the others below that your amazing poem included all the senses but sound and how well your imagery painted the thunderstorm. Congrats on your well-deserved Trophy win. Sandra
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations, John, well-done with your use of the other senses sans sound. I enjoyed the heart racing/dormant fear line in particular.
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your well deserved top win, John.
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Date: 2/16/2018 1:15:00 PM
Brilliant description John, most assuredly will place high...
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Date: 2/15/2018 9:13:00 PM
Masterfully penned with such elegant imagery, John! Should do very well in the contest. A treat to read! :)
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Date: 2/15/2018 1:02:00 PM
Surely this is the winner!! Brilliant! ~Judy
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Date: 2/15/2018 9:29:00 AM
This is... w o n d e r f u l. My best to you in the contest! xomo :)
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