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REVENGE UPON REVENGE UPON REVENGE

REVENGE UPON REVENGE UPON REVENGE There was a young Woman called Mrs. Dancy Always dressed so fancy, Used to gossip and flirt a lot, Which was a bad fault. Mrs Dancy was a butterfly Fliiting and flowing From one lover To another. Her first name Nancy, Always wore a low cleavage She was thirty five and good Looking, her revealing shorts, Didn’t hide much, her boyfriend, Encouraged her role In the village, he had a goal, And it worked, every husband Was mesmerized by her beauty, Her body and her long blonde, Hair, she had one eye brown And the other blue, which Worked out to her advantage Keep it quite, said the men, The wives must not get to know! But the wives in the village, Were quite sure, That two knocks on their door, “meant” meet me, so a plan Was devised By the wives, They watched and waited, Nancy, done with her duties And paid handsomely, Arrived back home To find Mrs Brown Enjoying a roll in the hay With her boyfriend, And every day Another wife was found! Nancy revealed all To the husbands, Who could not scold their wives, For everyone was guilty, So sorry’s were said quickly, What they were about to hear, Filled them all with fear One Sunday her boyfriend said, Well Nancy my dear, Tomorrow I’m out of here, But I leave you all with Something to remember, I have the clap, And now so do you all, And the husbands From their wives promiscuity, I guess I’ve ruined your lives, Time to go back To my wife, And our children, of five, So he left, With his theft! Nancy sought out his wife Told her that she Had lived with Her husband for a while, And that he had the clap, What a nasty chap, Does he think I don’t know said his wife, He has always been so Going to and fro But hear this Nancy, said his wife None of the five, Are his, Gee whizz Said Nancy, Good for you My lips are sealed But don’t ever think that I’ll say ‘I do’!

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Date: 8/22/2020 4:18:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, a justly moral tale written with wit, Jennifer, well done . . . : )
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Date: 8/21/2020 12:28:00 PM
You do have a gift for storytelling, Jennifer. I've been unable to leave comments on your most recent poem. Am just trying to see if this comment will post...
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Date: 8/21/2020 12:28:00 PM
There must be a glitch on the site as this one came through. I have reported it to Soup Admin
Date: 8/17/2020 8:43:00 PM
Love your story telling in this poetic form, Jennifer, you are a joy to read...So glad Ricky is happy about Leeds United, In the days of 'John Charles', when a lad growing up there, i visited Elland Road, Many times..Harry
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/21/2020 9:50:00 AM
Hi Harry, I am so pleased you enjoy my story telling sometimes I get carried away with myself and don't want to leave Fantasy land. Ricky would love to go to Eland Road he has been to England but they were only there for four days and his hopes of ever seeing a live game now are truly remote at least for another couple of years. Leeds United came to Johannesburg when Mcallistair was the Captain and I had to rush forward as they were getting on the bus and he took a photo with Ricky - he was 8 years old- he still has that photo and treasures it. Blessings Jennifer
Date: 8/17/2020 4:41:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant Sweet revenge upon i do. Asb Mev if you have the time will you read my poem Cinderella Bell Ball its reminds me a bit of yours. Cheers ta
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/21/2020 11:44:00 AM
I read your Cinderela Bell Ball and I commented on it - brilliant, yes, there is something in each of them that comes through as a message Thanks for commenting Christopher. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 8/17/2020 8:04:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, another wonderful write from your pen with the stongest morals. I guess I shall be like the others in my love at the twist at the end of this piece. I love the content. It is sad that there are such people as this in the world. One is always hearing stories. This one is a complete Wow. Have a wonderful Monday. Blessings and Hugs....Mike.
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/17/2020 8:56:00 AM
This temptation first happened with Adam and Eve, and thus it continued , not to the extent of the people in my poem, but they disobeyed GOD, good and light. Thank you for your continued support Mike, it is really appreciated. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 8/15/2020 8:29:00 PM
G'day Jennifer ... even though the morals in this poem of yours are loose, the moral of the verse is very strong indeed. Eventually the devil destroys the entire community - great story Jennifer - Lindsay
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/17/2020 8:51:00 AM
The evil in life lurks everywhere, and is ready to tempt the weak and vulnerable! But it will never win, light and good will rule in the long term! Blessing my friend Lindsay. Jennifer.
Date: 8/15/2020 2:16:00 PM
What a whopper of a tale! Sounds like a t.v. drama!
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Date: 8/17/2020 8:44:00 AM
Hi Kim, I love the last two poems you wrote, very deep, my poem is like a TV drama, everyone sleeps with everyone that they shouldn't. Hugs and blessings dear Kim, Jennifer.
Date: 8/15/2020 3:49:00 AM
Oh, I love this one. Nice to read.. best regards. Phred
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/17/2020 8:38:00 AM
Hi Phred, How some people live is unbelievable, but they amuse us, glad you enjoyed reading the poem, Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 8/14/2020 6:00:00 AM
Wow, that’s quite the tale. No winners in this one. Thanks for your visit and comment. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/17/2020 8:36:00 AM
It a great pleasure Rick - no you are quite right, all of them losers, big time! Be safe, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 8/13/2020 4:33:00 PM
Whoa! She got hers! A fun read.
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Date: 8/17/2020 8:34:00 AM
Yup, she sure did MLK, and probably will again, these sort of people don't seem to ever learn from their mistakes, they keep repeating them. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 8/10/2020 12:13:00 PM
- A skilled "player" has with this got the selected woman on the hook, and from there it is actually him who controls the game, regardless of whether she thinks it is her :) - Fun to read, Jenny ... skillfully written - Although this is imagination ... I think it could be true :))) - hugs and love // Anne-Lise :)
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/17/2020 8:28:00 AM
A skilled player - unfortunately I am certain there are situations like this in life, sad unhappy,lost souls! Thanks my dear Sunshine Smile, lovely and apt comment. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
Date: 8/9/2020 10:52:00 PM
Fun and messy and well-written and a great story to warn our teens what not to do! I wouldn't fancy being Nancy Dancy.
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/17/2020 8:25:00 AM
Hi John, we have had a very busy patch with our business the past two or three weeks and I could only get to answering everyone's comments in bits and pieces. Absolutely, there are such weird people in the world, one only has to listen to the world news, and all these tips for writing such an intensly messy poem(quite agree with you) are offered to us on a platter,I don't belong to any social media, well not actively in any case, too much going on with Planet Earth right now. Thank-you John for all your support and friendship, I value it! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 8/9/2020 5:18:00 PM
Ha, ha! I'm clapping for this one. Standing 'O.' ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/14/2020 5:33:00 AM
Hi Gershon, guess it takes all sorts in life - we live and learn:- "how the other side live!" I had a smile at you clapping for this write! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Date: 8/9/2020 3:22:00 PM
love the twist at the end jennifer - my mum trained as a nurse and worked in 'a special clinic' but she never came back with tales as crazy as this. hugs jan xx
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/14/2020 5:23:00 AM
Tried to make it as bizarre as I possibly could -- sure they must have lived in the Jerry Springer era! Hugs and blessings , Jennifer.
Date: 8/9/2020 2:03:00 PM
Gee! That was such an entertaining narrative, Jenny...but most of all I liked the twist at the end:) A case of Italian omerta`. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/9/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank-you Paul, it was all made up, but I thought I've got to put a twist to this story, glad it was entertaining! Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 8/9/2020 1:39:00 PM
This a true story?? I'm speechless.
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 8/9/2020 2:16:00 PM
Very much my imagination S.O, definatel not true but over the years I have seen and heard bits and pieces, so I rolled them all into one story - there are people, and there ARE people, sad to think human beings like this exist. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 8/9/2020 9:45:00 AM
Yikes, that was some revenge Jennifer Well told. Tom
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Date: 8/9/2020 2:22:00 PM
Revenge upon revenge upon revenge - maybe they all came from another planet. Blessings Tom, Jennifer.