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Return To Neighborhood

RETURN TO NEIGHBORHOOD A tiny speck in this vast world I zoom in from far above Growing… Growing… Plummet right in! Hit full grown – a giant jumbled kid Sucking on his pen Eyes far away Wild! And I am really there Dead center That point Thought spread in all directions Time’s troubadour singing There is this child alive within It’s not a cry exactly More he resides on the set with the rest of you Calling forth sound Colors Aromas Live sidewalks Uneven line of rooftops Sweep of trees Automobiles Short lines of speech Music – a cacophony! With ghostly personalities hovering Black windows Always that youthful whir Blending of limbs Sitting right up there with eyes ears forehead brains A naughty innocence defying description It rests yet stirs always It’s who you are You are neighborhood All the smells sounds colors dirt tears Leaping joys! A film shrouding I fit so tightly So charmingly young

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 1:57:00 PM
Daver,That is me below..It sent me to login so my name is not under my picture that is not there...Sara
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:10:00 PM
It rings ! Fishtown ! My home sir, and you have made me miss it even more than I've missed it with this powerful write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Dave ! Much love, james
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Date: 5/21/2011 2:38:00 PM
I think I would fit so tightly too.....the familiar world ....I felt a belonging there, that I so miss today!
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Date: 5/21/2011 8:25:00 AM
what an excellent last line for this one. So charmingly young. In many ways,your attitudes are so much like mine, Daver. Do you know the song Forever YOung? I think it quite fits you and me!
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:35:00 AM
super good morning Dave .. always read the best poets first on my list and home again now .. so enjoy your weekend luv.. and keep me entertained with your great fantastic eloquent words my friend..
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:35:00 AM
Enchanted by these youthful thoughts and exuberance, Daver. Your wisdom touched by this "naughty innocence" creates a timeless pillar of this neighbourhood. Today I listen to the sounds outside...there's a little bird that I think is enamoured with our hibiscus next to the window. This is the fifth day running it has been outside making advances.:) I thought it was hungry so I dropped some seeds by the window...it ignored the seeds...duh. Sweet little bird, sweet you. Love mikki
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:27:00 AM
ooo,, what a return,,,, and the memories and image are all i imagine of a youthful Daver... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:08:00 PM
Some old neighborhoods hold more memories than others and especially the ones from childhood days Dave.. this is such a fantastic expression of luv felt at a special time of life .. cherish the components mentioned as they linger on .... appreciate your sweet critique on my dedication to baby Ezzelle.. a new pink joy..
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Date: 5/19/2011 1:03:00 PM
I like the action in this poem. Nice use of imagery too. If you copy and paste this it should work for you http://youtu.be/WA-dnJe_MIA Hope you enjoy the video. Karen
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:48:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Daver. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:31:00 AM
Daver, I think you described yourself perfectly. The child inside will always be there. Love the way you describe "time's troubador singing." That is you, my friend, along with the "naughty innocence" and the "ghostly personalities hovering." Very cool poem, my friend. Love, carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:31:00 AM
a creativer piece you wrote here Daver, really enjoyed it.
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