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Retreat

The smoke stains on the windows Attempt to obscure the crystal morning light Of a chill autumn morning, a last leaf Of fall glory, dangling, Waiting for the next strong breeze To carry it into snow covered oblivion. The cabin creaks and pops As the wood burning stove joins forces with the sun, Chasing the breath revealing chill from the room As my mug warms my hands and I Blink the morning brightness tears from my eyes. Hunched against the cold in the small, bare room That’s located about halfway between Nowhere and someplace nobody’s ever been to, I, an anti-woodsman, find myself here again As surely as the red-wing blackbird Shouts his early morning lauds to the sun. I returned to sleep deeply in the lonely darkness, Surrounded by great-grandmother oaks, Then woke to start the fire, brew my coffee, And stare through the window, The piano wire muscles of my back, shoulders, and neck Melting with every crack-crackle and pop of the fire.

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Date: 6/23/2022 2:28:00 PM
What great sensory words. I felt like I was camping in the woods too!
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Date: 6/13/2022 3:05:00 PM
Love the melting muscles... I get that. I love the warm heat of the fire... Your cabin is lovely. Your retreat... your place... Ann
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Date: 5/26/2022 9:12:00 AM
You have described a beautiful and comforting retreat...I imagine a peaceful place of solitude. Thanks for sharing. Rhonda xx
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Date: 5/24/2022 10:13:00 AM
i really like this one. i want to be there, i can smell the coffee.
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Date: 4/23/2022 2:47:00 AM
Oh, yes, a nice one! Thanks so much, K.
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Date: 4/22/2022 6:17:00 PM
Beautifully written poem.
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Date: 4/22/2022 2:27:00 PM
Nice write Kenneth.. Can't wait to read more
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Date: 4/21/2022 11:47:00 PM
This is a great piece. I love the diction
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Date: 4/21/2022 2:16:00 PM
Wonderful write. I love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/21/2022 11:15:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup to you Kenneth. An excellent free verse you have shared. I felt as if I were right there in the room with you. Aloha, Connie
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