Retreat

The smoke stains on the windows
Attempt to obscure the crystal morning light
Of a chill autumn morning, a last leaf
Of fall glory, dangling, 
Waiting for the next strong breeze
To carry it into snow covered oblivion.

The cabin creaks and pops 
As the wood burning stove joins forces with the sun,
Chasing the breath revealing chill from the room 
As my mug warms my hands and I
Blink the morning brightness tears from my eyes.

Hunched against the cold in the small, bare room
That’s located about halfway between
Nowhere and someplace nobody’s ever been to,
I, an anti-woodsman, find myself here again
As surely as the red-wing blackbird
Shouts his early morning lauds to the sun.

I returned to sleep deeply in the lonely darkness,
Surrounded by great-grandmother oaks,
Then woke to start the fire, brew my coffee,
And stare through the window,
The piano wire muscles of my back, shoulders, and neck
Melting with every crack-crackle and pop of the fire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fenn Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 2:28 PM
What great sensory words. I felt like I was camping in the woods too!
Foster Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 3:05 PM
Love the melting muscles... I get that. I love the warm heat of the fire... Your cabin is lovely. Your retreat... your place... Ann
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 9:12 AM
You have described a beautiful and comforting retreat...I imagine a peaceful place of solitude. Thanks for sharing. Rhonda xx
Newbey Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 10:13 AM
i really like this one. i want to be there, i can smell the coffee.
John Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 2:47 AM
Oh, yes, a nice one! Thanks so much, K.
Deslippe Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Beautifully written poem.
Walker Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Nice write Kenneth.. Can't wait to read more
Mlonda Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 11:47 PM
This is a great piece. I love the diction
Mcintosh Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 2:16 PM
Wonderful write. I love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 11:15 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup to you Kenneth. An excellent free verse you have shared. I felt as if I were right there in the room with you. Aloha, Connie
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