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Rusty

Though I've been rusty and alone behind this shed for many years, I won’t bemoan my wasted state, for life has held more joy than tears. I do recall some dark days when I’d just come from the factory, a shiny bright-red dream-mobile. A rich young man paid cash for me. A fine garage became my home. I was impressed, but soon I knew that I was just a ride to him. His coldness and my sadness grew. My rescuer, a teenage boy, became my owner and my friend. He named me “Pal” and cared for me. Fifteen years later came the end. Though all my parts had ceased to work, he kept me. He knows how I feel! He still comes out to visit me and sits behind the steering wheel. posted July 17, 2019 entered the Favourite Poem in Rhyme from July 2019 Contest on August 4, 2020 Sponsor: Julia Ward July 2019, placed 7th of 13 in Craig Cornish's "Old Jalory" contest October 5, 2021 entered in the "R" New or Old Poetry Contest Placed 2nd Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/26/2021 10:12:00 AM
Janice, the wistful memories of a car expressed like a once loved, now discarded, treasure. Wonderful metaphor for discarded friendships or people. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/7/2021 5:52:00 PM
Hi Janice, You’ve penned such a well-written personification. You gave the old car a voice. Well done. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2021 2:03:00 PM
Fabulous personification, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I love this one. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 10/7/2021 8:04:00 AM
Janice, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this emotional poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 7/30/2019 1:15:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/30/2019 1:20:00 PM
Funom, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 7/28/2019 6:56:00 AM
I love this Janice. What a great story...Congratulations on your win. :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/28/2019 2:16:00 PM
Charles, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 7/28/2019 6:54:00 AM
Wonderful personification Janice and so true
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/28/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Craig, and THANK YOU so much for placing my entry! Janice
Date: 7/28/2019 12:09:00 AM
This brought tears to my eyes Janice. It is going into my Faves! When a poem can move me to tears, I remember it fondly for many years. Congratulations on your deserving win that is a podium win for me! xxoo : )
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/28/2019 2:19:00 PM
Connie, thank you so much for your kind words! Janice
Date: 7/27/2019 9:42:00 PM
That is SO sweet, Janice. Love it. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/28/2019 2:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 7/27/2019 6:13:00 PM
I love the final verse and the personification of the jalopy!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/27/2019 7:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! Janice
Date: 7/21/2019 1:39:00 AM
G'day Janice ... what a great verse you've written here. It just had love written all over it - thank you Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/21/2019 7:21:00 AM
THANKS A MILLION, Lindsay! Janice

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