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dim is the dusk; dimmer the mind, except when tsunami floods the sky. eyes like stars surrender not. dire downpour before dawn - catalyst of sewed-shut eyes. shaking of your body-boat. it’s not a dream. wake up! 8/13/2021

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Date: 8/16/2021 8:51:00 AM
I like the repetition of the letter "d" in this one; it is so noticeable, I am going to dive back in for a new read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 8/15/2021 8:47:00 PM
I get these in the morning too, and at both ends. lol... If the BR doors are shut at the time, holding patterns become irregular. I shall spare you the rest... lol. Thanks, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2021 7:38:00 AM
LOL! This is more about being tired after a restless sleep.
Date: 8/15/2021 2:19:00 AM
So life IS it wake UP, Clever ! salute, alkas
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Alkas!
Date: 8/15/2021 1:54:00 AM
Is it a dream or a tsunami? Well written, my friend. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 8/14/2021 8:22:00 PM
So vivid, yes we must wake up to the turmoil around us~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 8/14/2021 9:30:00 AM
God bless you Kim :) This woke me up lol <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2021 6:40:00 PM
God bless you too! Thank you!
Date: 8/14/2021 9:06:00 AM
Well-crafted verse, Kim. I enjoyed reading this poem. Have a great weekend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2021 6:39:00 PM
Thank you!

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