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Resting Upon a Vision

thoughts of tranquility as I gaze beyond my sight immersed in loving thoughts a pink solitude bring precious light a life of gratitude a picture of delight I drown in this beauty a hope for this night

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James Fraser

Date: 7/12/2010 12:33:00 PM

Lovely piece Rick, beautifully written. Many congratulations on your win >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol

Molly Cooper

Date: 7/12/2010 10:13:00 AM

I really like this one! ~ Molly

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/11/2010 9:59:00 PM

awaiting tranquility first seen in vision sounds quite anxious. beautiful write, as well.& congrats(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:29:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 5:19:00 PM

Wonderful! congratulations, Rick.

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 3:48:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick on your poem's success in the contest, Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 12:03:00 PM

This poem was wonderful and would have placed higher if it hadn't exceeded the line count, Rick. Excellent! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2010 4:10:00 PM

Reads like a wonderful night gazing at the heavens...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write about the Chihuahua...I wrote in the comments that I don't own one but saw this picture of one in a McDonald's Coffee Cup and wrote the poem...I would like one if my Rat Terrier passed...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 2:36:00 PM

Your words are balm to me Rick and soothing to the eyes and mind.. thankxxx and God bless u too .. GREATER is HE that is in ME then HE that is in the World... luv.. but we already know this..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 1:52:00 PM

Lovely words Rick.. and a joy to read of such tranquility... hope u will find a moment to read "Realm Warfare" and give me a critique on it.. thankxxx with luv..