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Back before the world knew of Computers, cell phones and compact discs There lived a little girl who loved grandma In a way that could be said was fanatical She followed grandma through her garden Naming vegetables and flowers, listening To the bird sing a beautiful sonnet While her heart raced on with love so honest Grandma became her greatest fan Laughing at her antics with such pleasure Her heart was filled with love unconditional Love that erased all worry, fear or dread With her grandma, the little girl felt Like light reflected all around her heart Inside her thoughts, wherever she went And there was light to capture her warmth As she learned more and more about her grandma There came a moment in time when she realized Grandma often lay on the couch, closing her eyes But wasn’t always sleeping, only taking a hiatus “Grandma, are you sleeping?’ the girl would ask “No, I’m only resting my eyes, dear one,” she would say then The little girl would watch her face as she rested Wondering if she could hope to interrupt her hiatus Soon, Grandma would rise from her afternoon rest And give the girl a smile, a laugh and a caress Whispering to her of all the love and joy she expressed Through kindness, gentleness and that giving spirit Back before the world knew of Dreaded heartbreak, dying dreams and the sigh of death This little girl found solace in her grandma’s arms Where there were only smiles and laughter with no harm Hiatus Poetry Contest, sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke January 27, 2021

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Date: 2/24/2021 7:24:00 PM
Soft, soothing, touching words! Let it soak in! Congrats on your win, Regina!
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Date: 2/24/2021 9:27:00 AM
Gina, you just described my relationship with my grandmother! Can you see my ear to ear smile?! As a little girl I followed her everywhere. She taught me her love of gardens. Congratulations on your first place win! Sending you bunches of blessings!
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Date: 2/24/2021 8:01:00 AM
Gina, what a touching and beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest _ Constance
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Date: 1/30/2021 6:26:00 AM
Strange, we lived far from my grandparents on both sides of the family, but with my grandfather Panos who was my Mom'm dad, we communicated at least once a week with his and my poetry, he was the greatest grandpa ever, I met him 5 times in my life but he made an ever lasting impression on me. I have posted two of his poems on this site. I loved your poem. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:16:00 PM
Such a beautiful exchange between grandmother and granddaughter, real great imagery and fine expression Gina. Indeed a gem of a piece. Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 1/28/2021 11:45:00 AM
Beautiful! I am a grandma. My grandchildren are my world. I love them so! They are continually in my thoughts and prayers! I love it when they are in my backyard in the spring, amid the new growth of the garden. Did your grandma pass her love of the garden on to you? What a sweet legacy that would be <3
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Date: 1/27/2021 9:19:00 PM
Resting one's eyes, Words i know so well Regina, from a long long time ago, your poem, each line, each word, so lovely so apt,,Now i'm a grandfather of 3 and great grandfather of 4. relate so much to this wonderful poem.
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Date: 1/27/2021 9:39:00 AM
Lovely words Regina, expressing the love between a Grandma and granddaughter, a wonderful read~ Belle
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Date: 1/27/2021 9:09:00 AM
It is a cute and lovely poem, Regina. I enjoyed it very much :)
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Date: 1/27/2021 8:57:00 AM
What a cute poem. I hope others would read this delicacy. I think they are having their afternoon nap :) ~~
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