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She was the white horse of the Himalayas Purity Smolder of flameless skies Then, chains of conquest - A half-century of human Inhibition The Neophyte's arrogance of consumption Would Flounder to stain and slay the wind Her Dolorous pinnacle lies, littered with Debris dense Lecherous ego Immaculate essence siphoned In the name of Vainglorious Bombast For sanctity, for healing, for reverence Let Everest rest, in Providence. 5/31/19 For Eight Word Free Verse Challenge contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Required Words: Smolder, Inhibition, Neophyte, Flounder, Dolorous, Lecherous, Bombast, Providence.

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Date: 6/24/2019 8:07:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, congratulations dear poet. a wonderful winning poem. Happy for you,
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Date: 6/21/2019 1:35:00 PM
Hi Michelle, an amazing poem - congratulations. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/21/2019 12:29:00 PM
This is a quality write, with great personification, read it more than a few times, majestic like Everest! Congrats Michelle on a fine win!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/21/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, John-
Date: 6/7/2019 2:22:00 PM
You made good use of your eight words.
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Date: 6/7/2019 1:42:00 AM
I am amazed what your imagination did with eight words I could not do a thing with. Wow! Wonderfully done, my friend.
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Date: 6/6/2019 9:43:00 PM
A very thought-provoking write, Michelle, and your title is a clever juxtaposition. ~Mark
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Date: 6/2/2019 8:46:00 PM
The closing couplet is an absolute beauty! G.L. in the contest, Michelle. :) gw
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Date: 6/1/2019 3:42:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, but I do hope they post, "In the name of Vainglorious Bombast" on Trump's Monumental Vanity Wall! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/1/2019 5:35:00 AM
Let Everest slumber indeed , leave her to beauty and rest. Well put together Michelle. gl in the contest dear one
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Date: 6/1/2019 3:52:00 AM
This is great. Good luck for the contest, Kai
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