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Resolution Pleiades

Remind me how easy Regret can steal peace. I Resolve to right the wrongs, Return items borrowed, Restore what was ruined Reclaiming what was lost. Reparations saved me. Written for Kim Merryman's Poetry Soup "R" Pleiades Contest 4/16/21 WON THIRD PLACE

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2021 7:58:00 AM

What a smooth flowing Pleiades, Carol! You have an experienced pen. Congratulations on a most worthy win. ~ Regards // paul

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/25/2021 5:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul, for your kind words. Carol Louise

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/20/2021 6:37:00 PM

Ah, Carol, this is a masterful expression of your title word. Introspective beauty flows gracefully from your gifted pen, dear poetess. Congratulations for your wonderful win, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/21/2021 8:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, and God bless you this spring season.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2021 4:08:00 PM

You portrayed your title well and your lines flowed smoothly! Nice job, Carol! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/21/2021 8:06:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I love to compose Pleiades. God bless you this spring season.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 4/19/2021 1:03:00 PM

Great R words! Very deep truth expressed here. Congrats on your win!

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/21/2021 8:06:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer! God bless you this spring season.