Residing In His Narrow World

Cozy comfort he finds residing in his narrow world
Never veering from neighborhood he well knows,
Keeping to his familiar corners of adamant beliefs
Roaming within limits of truth he chooses to see.

His paths have been paved for his own two feet,
Restless he feels when strangers trespass his street
For long ago he decided who fits his myopic sight
Guarded by perimeters of his sacred boundaries.

He won't attempt to understand differing insights,
Never having been part of a scholarly discussion;
For he can't comprehend things new and unknown,
Afraid that new knowledge may pollute his mind.

When a tourist pays a beggar on a main city-street
He rushes to take a picture of beggar's empty mug,
Directing him to smile broadly on hungry stomach
So he can exhibit to his world, proof of lazy people.

Saddened he feels seeing a child cling to mother’s gut
As she lays dead amid ruins of a hapless war-zone.
He looks away mourning, seeing such dreadful scenes
But that would be the extent of his generous streak.

March 11, 2018
Placed first in contest 540 by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 8:50 PM
There are some such selfish people who are chained to their own narrow world, never allowing any room for others. They are not open to changes or new knowledge. They can never accommodate others or their views. Powerful portrayal, dear Vijay.,
Carber Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Congrats Vijay-- you write with the power of someone who was there....
Callus Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Back again, after several months, to congratulate you on placing at the top in Contest 540, Vijay. Regards // paul
Devonshire Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 12:40 PM
There are some people who will never reach beyond their comfort zones. The last two verses show how shallow this type of life can be. Beautifully penned, Vijay. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Sands Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
Raven Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Hi Vijay, a deep powerful write. You write this style of poem with reality and power, Wonderful, real, raw poetry my friend. You write this style of poetry so well. Excellent write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Downing  Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 6:51 PM
WOW, Vijay... I felt his pain because I've lost family member in war. What a great write!
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Thank you Akkina..I am so sorry to hear that you lost a loved one in war. Many thanks for your support.
Callus Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:22 PM
A dweller in a comfort zone who most definitely is an egoist with a hard heart...a sitter on a fence. Fortunately not everybody is like that!! Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Thank you Paul..appreciate your thoughts.
Pett Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Great write Vijay, your poem describes reality and truth, so well written. :))
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:52 AM
Many thanks Roy..appreciate your kind words.
Blanca Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Vijay, we live in a world over abundance and poverty as well as good people and some not so good.
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:51 AM
So true Carlos..appreciate your thoughts and comments.
Kannan Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:14 AM
such a deep write... Very powerful... There are so many narrow minded people like him... Perfect depiction...
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Many thanks Supraja..appreciate your kind feedback.
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:05 AM
We are fortunate such narrow minded people have little impact, I wouldn't mourn their loss. A fine, strong write, Vijay. Regards, Viv
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Thank you Viv, for your visit and kind words.
Gupta Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Wonderful life penned in the wonderful poem ...
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Thank you Probir.
Mhangwa Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:30 AM
Nice poem Vijay! Very heart-warming
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 6:06 AM
Thank for the visit and kind words, Kudzai.
Canerdy Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 12:41 AM
Vivid, effective description of a TRULY narrow-minded person, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 6:05 AM
Thank you Janice..appreciate your kind words.
Gentile Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 12:26 PM
This is so moving and powerful, Vijay! There are so many who reside in a narrow world of their own and without reaching out to others with understanding, I do fear the future. well done !!
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 12:32 PM
So true Mike..many fit the profile. Appreciate your kind feedback..many thanks.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Stunning poetry, Vijay. Keen insight to some who hold distant compassion, and up close aversion to charity. Your pen truth shines brightly. Love and joy always.
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Appreciate your kind words..many thanks Freddie.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:03 AM
familiar streets of adamant belief, sacred boundaries, he cannot comprehend things new and unknown. So powerfully apt! Great capture of someone most of us know and stay away from.
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Many thanks Caren..appreciate your kind words.
Roper Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:46 AM
nicely done ,Vijay.. the imagery is great enjoyed reading.. hugs eve
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Many thanks Eve..appreciate your comments.
Williams Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:22 AM
An excellent piece Vijay though I won't say it all fiction. These myopic and inflexible people do exist and you have described them so well. Maria
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:31 AM
You are right Maria..many fit his profile..thank for the kind words.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 12:44 AM
Excellent. Very interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Many thanks Ravi..appreciate your kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 5:47 PM
wow, what a guy. Sadly, he is the epitome of so many people like him in the world. You presented his type very well, Vijay
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Many thanks Andrea..you are right, many like him in this world..appreciate your thoughts, as always.
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 4:00 PM
- He lives in the street of truth ... fabulous written, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate your thoughts, as always.
Onclaud Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 2:13 PM
a powerful depiction of man's indifference about things that matter... so well expressed, vijay... huggs
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Thank you nette..always happy to read your comments.
Leiser Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 1:21 PM
There is much truth in this scenario, and a sad reality for many. Very thought provoking, a powerful write.
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Laura..appreciate your kind feedback.
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