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Residing In His Narrow World

Cozy comfort he finds residing in his narrow world Never veering from neighborhood he well knows, Keeping to his familiar corners of adamant beliefs Roaming within limits of truth he chooses to see. His paths have been paved for his own two feet, Restless he feels when strangers trespass his street For long ago he decided who fits his myopic sight Guarded by perimeters of his sacred boundaries. He won't attempt to understand differing insights, Never having been part of a scholarly discussion; For he can't comprehend things new and unknown, Afraid that new knowledge may pollute his mind. When a tourist pays a beggar on a main city-street He rushes to take a picture of beggar's empty mug, Directing him to smile broadly on hungry stomach So he can exhibit to his world, proof of lazy people. Saddened he feels seeing a child cling to mother’s gut As she lays dead amid ruins of a hapless war-zone. He looks away mourning, seeing such dreadful scenes But that would be the extent of his generous streak. March 11, 2018 Placed first in contest 540 by Brian Strand

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Date: 5/22/2023 8:50:00 PM
There are some such selfish people who are chained to their own narrow world, never allowing any room for others. They are not open to changes or new knowledge. They can never accommodate others or their views. Powerful portrayal, dear Vijay.,
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Date: 1/13/2019 7:10:00 AM
Congrats Vijay-- you write with the power of someone who was there....
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Date: 1/12/2019 3:00:00 PM
Back again, after several months, to congratulate you on placing at the top in Contest 540, Vijay. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/12/2019 12:40:00 PM
There are some people who will never reach beyond their comfort zones. The last two verses show how shallow this type of life can be. Beautifully penned, Vijay. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/12/2019 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)
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Date: 11/19/2018 2:01:00 PM
Hi Vijay, a deep powerful write. You write this style of poem with reality and power, Wonderful, real, raw poetry my friend. You write this style of poetry so well. Excellent write. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/14/2018 6:51:00 PM
WOW, Vijay... I felt his pain because I've lost family member in war. What a great write!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/17/2018 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Akkina..I am so sorry to hear that you lost a loved one in war. Many thanks for your support.
Date: 3/14/2018 12:22:00 PM
A dweller in a comfort zone who most definitely is an egoist with a hard heart...a sitter on a fence. Fortunately not everybody is like that!! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/14/2018 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Paul..appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 3/14/2018 11:25:00 AM
Great write Vijay, your poem describes reality and truth, so well written. :))
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:52:00 AM
Many thanks Roy..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/14/2018 10:08:00 AM
Vijay, we live in a world over abundance and poverty as well as good people and some not so good.
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:51:00 AM
So true Carlos..appreciate your thoughts and comments.
Date: 3/14/2018 8:14:00 AM
such a deep write... Very powerful... There are so many narrow minded people like him... Perfect depiction...
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:51:00 AM
Many thanks Supraja..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/14/2018 3:05:00 AM
We are fortunate such narrow minded people have little impact, I wouldn't mourn their loss. A fine, strong write, Vijay. Regards, Viv
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/14/2018 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Viv, for your visit and kind words.
Date: 3/13/2018 10:58:00 AM
Wonderful life penned in the wonderful poem ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/13/2018 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 3/13/2018 1:30:00 AM
Nice poem Vijay! Very heart-warming
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/13/2018 6:06:00 AM
Thank for the visit and kind words, Kudzai.
Date: 3/13/2018 12:41:00 AM
Vivid, effective description of a TRULY narrow-minded person, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 3/13/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Janice..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/12/2018 12:26:00 PM
This is so moving and powerful, Vijay! There are so many who reside in a narrow world of their own and without reaching out to others with understanding, I do fear the future. well done !!
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Date: 3/12/2018 12:32:00 PM
So true Mike..many fit the profile. Appreciate your kind feedback..many thanks.
Date: 3/12/2018 11:25:00 AM
Stunning poetry, Vijay. Keen insight to some who hold distant compassion, and up close aversion to charity. Your pen truth shines brightly. Love and joy always.
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Date: 3/12/2018 12:31:00 PM
Appreciate your kind words..many thanks Freddie.
Date: 3/12/2018 11:03:00 AM
familiar streets of adamant belief, sacred boundaries, he cannot comprehend things new and unknown. So powerfully apt! Great capture of someone most of us know and stay away from.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2018 12:30:00 PM
Many thanks Caren..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/12/2018 9:46:00 AM
nicely done ,Vijay.. the imagery is great enjoyed reading.. hugs eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2018 12:30:00 PM
Many thanks Eve..appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/12/2018 3:22:00 AM
An excellent piece Vijay though I won't say it all fiction. These myopic and inflexible people do exist and you have described them so well. Maria
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:31:00 AM
You are right Maria..many fit his profile..thank for the kind words.
Date: 3/12/2018 12:44:00 AM
Excellent. Very interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:30:00 AM
Many thanks Ravi..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/11/2018 5:47:00 PM
wow, what a guy. Sadly, he is the epitome of so many people like him in the world. You presented his type very well, Vijay
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:30:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea..you are right, many like him in this world..appreciate your thoughts, as always.
Date: 3/11/2018 4:00:00 PM
- He lives in the street of truth ... fabulous written, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate your thoughts, as always.
Date: 3/11/2018 2:13:00 PM
a powerful depiction of man's indifference about things that matter... so well expressed, vijay... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/11/2018 3:42:00 PM
Thank you nette..always happy to read your comments.
Date: 3/11/2018 1:21:00 PM
There is much truth in this scenario, and a sad reality for many. Very thought provoking, a powerful write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/11/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Laura..appreciate your kind feedback.
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