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Rescued

A jealous Goddess envious of me Banned me to deep end of the sea. I sought with last breath for life saving air, When naught but water flowed down there. A dolphin aware of my great distress (And I near death, I must confess,) Daring Goddess’s wrath to rescue me, With mighty heave tossed me from sea. I landed safely on a far-flung beach And right within Goddess’s reach. With an unladylike or Goddess curse, She tried my young life to disperse. Once more the brave dolphin arrived to save And carry me from ocean grave. He showed me how to extract air from sea Which is now second home to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:21:00 PM
Hey, is this the mythology for how mermaids came to be. I love this, Joyce. Congrats on your win, sweetie.
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Date: 4/6/2012 5:30:00 PM
Excellent write,Joyce.Congratulations on your win....
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Date: 4/6/2012 4:58:00 AM
Very nice Joyce a worthy winner here xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 3:13:00 AM
A seaworthy fairy tale, Joyce...Throw the dolphins in every time and I am all yours..these are my favorite of creatures...Happy Easter Weekend, Joyce. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:34:00 AM
congrats Joyce on a wonderful write and well deserved win for another rare beauty poem luv.. happy easter blessings flowing your way ..
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Date: 4/5/2012 4:13:00 PM
A wonderful piece. Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
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Date: 3/31/2012 5:47:00 PM
I had to laugh out loud at the end Joyce! this is wonderful!! I love it! big hug my friend,love deb
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Date: 3/31/2012 3:44:00 PM
Joyce I love the feeling from this so much!!! You have an amazing imagination. Luv to you Michael
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