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Requiem For the Final Breath

I heard the squelch of death nearing once again, pummelling with the purple pulsation in frail vein. Mortality enclosed within mind-soul-body trinity, the sound of its footfall trailed the echo of eternity. Air of twilight hour resonated in the silence of death, I heard it compose the requiem for my final breath. When at dawn the cadence of the symphony would stop, you would find me transfixed in the glimmer of dewdrop. September 15, 2019 Contest : All Yours (Feb 15) Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 2/16/2021 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Very Creative. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...............
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Date: 2/16/2021 8:47:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Date: 9/28/2019 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement. ;0)
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Date: 9/27/2019 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Place win with this wonderful piece Subimal! xxoo
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Date: 9/27/2019 9:10:00 PM
Subimal, it’s wonderful to share the podium with you as I marvel at the depth and dark dramatic beauty of your poem. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:23:00 PM
So great a poem it had to make the top, congrats on a shared win!
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