Repetition, Repetition, Repetition

I can’t always remember what I said So maybe these may be words you’ve already read But once I get a line in my head I can’t always remember what I’ve just said I like to try and entertain with my humour Brits have no talent – well that’s just a rumour But once I get a poem in my head I can’t always remember what I’ve just read Have I told you this line before I may be repeating – sorry I’m a bore But once I get a thought in my head I can’t always remember what I’ve just said My dear old mum she has dementia* She’s repeats herself or loses her dentures Sadly once she gets a thought in her head She can’t remember what she’s just said. 26th April 2014 Written for ‘Irritate Me’ Contest Sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot *Mum's dementia/memory issues aren't too bad at the moment this bit is poetic licence, but sadly over time she is getting worse
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Vaso Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Great great great poem, even if its sad all that inflicts us with pain! I wish your mum well!
Allison Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Thanks Arthur - there was 'poetic licence' used here but if i could turn back time and have her as she once was it would be the greatest thing in the world Hugs Jan x
Walker  Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Wonderful Jan... Perfect tagged for the contest... Verlena
Allison Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 12:55 AM
Thanks Verlena. Hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Seems Roy was duly impressed as am I !!! Sure can relate to this one dear Jan! LOL Love from a real old geezer! XOXOX
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Roys comments made me LOL. thanks for dropping by Hugs Jan xxx
Frankel Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 5:49 AM
brilliant, very witty! cheers, Alex
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 6:55 AM
Thanks for dropping by with a lovely comment Alex. Hugs Jan xx
Enriquez Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:53 PM
Dear Jan: This is a witty and yet profound work you have written here. Nice job. All the best then. Leon
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 12:01 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Leon. Hugs Jan x
Smith Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Well done Jan...Very Humorous Tim
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Thanks Tim. Hugs Jan xxx
Jerden Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Very humorous, Jan! Cheers, Roy
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:55 PM
Roy you have truly made my day with YOUR humour. Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:42 PM
Brilliant Roy
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:25 PM
I have a feeling I may have read this comment before Roy! Lol Hugs Jan
Jerden Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Very humorous, Jan! Cheers, Roy
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:20 PM
Lol Roy
Jerden Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Very humorous, Jan! Cheers, Roy
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:21 PM
LOL Roy
Nance Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:54 PM
haha if funny cuz its true. i see how sometimes i do that same things. :) great poem, good luck in the contest!!
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Thanks Casarah! Hugs Jan xx
Gorelick Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 2:33 PM
I enjoyed your silly poem..or did I just say that.lol. What fun! BG
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Hi Barbara can you refresh my mind - which poem are you talking about I've posted 3 today :-)l I wish I could turn the time back and have mum as she was before her fall so whilst there is humour in the write it is also tinged with sadness. hugs Jan x
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