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Rent

In Beamish Street, collecting the rent, Was how my Tuesday mornings were spent. An arduous task at the best of times. Nell McFee, hubby in jail for various crimes. Sobbing to me as she had no rent to pay, Offering to make it up to me in some other way. With Billy Jones, I knew I would be in for a fight. Swore he paid twice last week and taught his dog to bite. Seventy-eight houses in Beamish Street, every one rented. I heard every excuse not to pay that had ever been invented. The Browns, a dear old couple. He was ill, medicine’s dear. Always on time, they couldn’t pay. She greeted me with a tear. I have become tough as nails, oblivious to renter’s pleads, But just this once to be the helping hand someone needs, I ticked my list ‘Browns FULLY PAID’ and stayed a while. Shoved my own money in the bag, continued with a smile.
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Ashley Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Dear SV, I enjoyed the generous yet humble twist in the end. Your poem paints an intimate portrait of a poor neighborhood through the voice of the dreaded "rent collector" (with a heart). An act of kindness will always be repaid twofold. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring poet friend.. ~Susan
Miller Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 7:20 AM
This is great SV close to reality of my childhood, congratulations
Toney Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 3:14 PM
SV, love the unexpected compassion coming from someone who had “ become tough as nails, oblivious to renter’s pleads.” Congratulations on your top-10 finish on Mile 5 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, since Mile 6 has already started. You can find your overall standing in my Mile 5 blog post.
Anaya Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your marathon win SV! This already one of yours that is in my favs__xoxoxo's Anaya
Baker Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 4:37 PM
Congrats on the winner, SV. Well-written and great rhyming. Write On! Bill
Volumes Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Suggest a few for me please Bill. I think its sad when good poems get buried. Tell me some of your favorites that I could start reading. I think we all should post a short list of the buried poems that may never see the light of day again. Thank you for your encouraging words Bill . I really do appreciate it. SV
Drowley Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. The kindness of paying rent must have been heaven sent.
Volumes Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Thank you for your comment. This was completely fiction inspired by the contest. I think its the other way round. I think with every act of kindness we send a message to heaven that we are getting it right. Hopefully it pleases our Lord and it turn, it pleases us, thats why he smiled.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 9:40 PM
Your story offers hope that kindness does exist, even in a make believe story. Congrats!
Volumes Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 10:03 PM
Oh Barbara, I am convinced of that. For every cruel deed, there is such an abundance of human kindness, and if a time ever comes that we cant find it, we will just have to create some more. Thank you for your comment.
Anaya Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on your win.. Well-deserved! I agree with Sotto, but have no idea? I hope you two find response.
Volumes Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 10:06 PM
Got me? I have searched every poem and every soupmail. Even my private Email... nothing :(
Volumes Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Sweet Anaya, I am glad you liked this one, I must admit, I do too. Its the poems that come to me as if they really happened, yet are totally ficticious, and flow from me so easily, that are the best. I was seeing this one almost like a daydream, or a memory as I wrote it. Thank you for your comment.
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Your poem is a masterpiece, filled with vivid imagery that resonates deeply with the reader. Your clever use of humor brought a smile to my face, while the heartfelt ending left me feeling moved. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Although I offered feedback, I received no response from you, so I shall refrain from further commentary. Thank you for sharing your work.
Volumes Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 4:14 PM
Please, I aoplogise for not responding to your comment. I value your comments. Could you direct me to where I have neglected to reply to you? I will most certainly correct my remiss. So glad you liked this poem.
Hawley Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:26 PM
I loved that this poem was a story of kindness. Congrats on your win in my contest.
Volumes Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so much Miranda, I am honored that you found my poem worthy of inclusion on your winning enrtries list...
Gorelick Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 7:20 PM
A Dixonian landscape you paint, your largesse is to be admired. A descriptive narrative, BOL. Robert
Gorelick Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 4:57 PM
Feel free to follow at your leisure, my pleasure!
Volumes Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 8:02 PM
I think Direct Debits put him out of a job Robert. My limited vocabulary caused me to look up largesse, and yes it was the criterior of the contest to be a helping hand to someone in need. Would you mind if I followed your poems? I may increase my vocab reading yours.
Anaya Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 6:55 PM
SO creative, non-fiction or straight up fiction, I laughed with your humor and sighed with empathy to a heartfelt ending. Best for the contest S's'V's! I will cherish it in my favorites. ~Anaya
Volumes Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 7:54 PM
100% fiction, and you 100% gold. Thank you so very much Anaya. ;) So appreciated. BTW, yours is tons better than mine.
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