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“Sometimes too much drink is barely enough.” Mark Twain, on Alcoholism


05 July 2015
Poem of the Day - 07 July 2015
Write With the Wit of Twain Contest - 4th Place
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Laura Breidenthal

September 8, 2015 at 3:47 PM

Love it, and ouch!!! Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick

July 25, 2015 at 5:32 AM

!!! : > )...Way to go.Congrats..Sara

Paul Callus

July 21, 2015 at 1:30 AM

Excellent, Kim!! Poor pirate...a sobering experience, I would say! Congrats on your win...very much deserved:) hugs // paul

Kim Merryman

July 20, 2015 at 9:14 PM

Ouch! That would teach me not to get drunk! Congrats on your win, Kim! Love, Kim

Suzanne Delaney

July 20, 2015 at 4:23 PM

So funny, Reminds me of Ruprecht and his fork in the movie, 'Dirty Rotten Scoundrels'. Congrats on your win. SuZ

Tim Ryerson

July 20, 2015 at 2:26 PM

And I am 'hooked' on this clever, funny. and VERY original limerick Kim...Can't help wondering if he did the same after a bath, especially..Well, um--- Okay, we won't go there...MANY congrats - Tim

James Inman

July 20, 2015 at 10:26 AM

A teaching moment. Enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2015 at 3:03 PM

hey, I am also seeing down here that you got a POD for this one also. So a double congrats to you and for a win in my contest as well. GREAT job, Kim!

Skat A

July 19, 2015 at 2:32 PM

Kim, Congratulations on your awesome win... LOVE SKAT

Abdul Malik Mandani

July 19, 2015 at 2:14 PM

This is good, it reminds me not to rub my face with a hook! Congrats.

Viv Wigley

July 19, 2015 at 1:35 PM

Hi Kim, just back to say congratulations, knew it would do well. Viv x

Lycia Harding

July 19, 2015 at 12:38 PM

Haha! Cause and effect, baby! Love this one Kim, congrats on your win! xoxo

Alexis Y.

July 19, 2015 at 12:08 PM

Kim, I just stopped by to say congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

July 19, 2015 at 10:57 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

July 9, 2015 at 11:27 PM

Wow! What a powerful message done in a humorous style, dear. You are deserving of POTD with this! :) Congrats...I'm a little late...but better late than never.

Jan Allison

July 8, 2015 at 4:24 AM

a lovely positive message - congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

July 8, 2015 at 12:49 AM

Kim congratulations on Poem Of The Day with this great limerick poem, enjoy the honor

Viv Wigley

July 8, 2015 at 12:39 AM

Great Limerick, Kim, and congrats on POTD. Reminded me of the conversation I heard when a man asked a friend about his father, and the friend replied he'd died. "How?" asked the man. His friend said that a train had ran over his finger. "His finger? And he died?". "yeah," said his friend,, "he was picking his nose at the time". Viv x

Judy Konos

July 7, 2015 at 10:59 PM

Congratulations Poem of the Day....

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

July 7, 2015 at 10:29 PM

A good one, clever lady! Congrats to you on being chosen TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda

Lycia Harding

July 7, 2015 at 7:16 PM

Ha! Limericks are my fave. Gongrats, Kim!

Lycia Harding

July 7, 2015 at 8:46 PM

:'P

Shane Cooper

July 7, 2015 at 5:02 PM

Very clever Patrice. Loved it. Congrats on POTD. love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper

July 8, 2015 at 1:33 AM

Ahhh! Well the little black duck reference is about a cartoon character that I identify closely with ( i will type a http: address below and leave you to find out who it is). And as you might have guessed I am a half glass empty person.c'est la vie! http://members.ozemail.com.au/~karl/images/daffy-duck.png

Shane Cooper

July 7, 2015 at 8:01 PM

I was talked into a change to embrace reality, and yes kim it was funny, thanks for the giggles they are more valuable than diamonds to this little black duck. love Shane xxx :-)