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Reminders of Love

reminders of love The smell of a cigar  Its tobacco so good Reminds me of my Tad When he smoked after food. The sound of the sea When it  rushes near You can hear the strength Fills u with fear But the love that you have Of nature as a whole Overides that fear Deep within your soul Your love of food Cooked to perfection Steaks so rare No toughness detected A dish of pavlova With raspberries and cream Meringue so crisp But with marshmallow within. The warmth of those arms That mean so much The petal like kisses That fill you with love. Love neednt cost a lot Nothing is taboo You need to open your eyes Look about you  Cos love is all around For one and all All we have to do Is listen to natures call. To Look  without seeing Is really a sin To touch without feeling Means no love within So open your heart Let the love flow So look and feel Make yourself glow To love is to remember Your family and friends Whose love for each other Have no ends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/19/2012 7:02:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! 'so open your heart' ...'make yourself glow' ...my two favorite lines :) Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 9/23/2012 7:29:00 PM
i think its very well written ,its a feeling that comes from your heart,
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Date: 9/19/2012 5:04:00 AM
Thank you Robert for your comments. I dont say that i am a poetry writer, just write what's in my mind. Any advice you can give is appreciated.
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Date: 9/18/2012 11:02:00 PM
This writing needs a few touch-ups, but it is overall an entertaining read.
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Kasim Ishmael
Date: 9/23/2012 7:32:00 PM
what do you think need touch up,because some people write a few lines,or copy some ones lines and calls it poetry,poetry is a story that you feel it and sees it as you read it,with im gets with this poem,and not just a few lines

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