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This is not me but a picture from the internet. My parents had already raised their family but adopted me on their twenty-fifth wedding anniversary. The adoption was not finalized for a year though. 

October a month of remembrance for me Mother has a birthday about the middle Then daddy and her wed you must see Their twenty-fifth anniversary riddle Mother has a birthday about the middle Just before they bring me home from Lanett Their twenty-fifth anniversary riddle An eighteen month old girl is what they did get Just before they bring me home from Lanett Then daddy and her wed you must see An eighteen month old daughter is what they did get October a month of remembrance for me Contest: October Pantoum Sponsor: William Kekaula Written: October 18, 2019

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Date: 11/13/2019 5:38:00 PM
Quite a wonderful Pautoum. Enjoyed.
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:08:00 AM
A lovely and touching write. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 11/6/2019 2:46:00 PM
love this touching write
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2019 3:07:00 PM
Jack, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 11/5/2019 7:05:00 AM
Nicely done Sarah. It made me smile. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/6/2019 3:08:00 PM
Judy Thanks for dropping by with a encouraging review of my work. Sara
Date: 10/31/2019 11:05:00 PM
this was beautiful... Ann
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/1/2019 6:13:00 PM
Ann, Thanks for the visit to my page and leaving an encouraging review of my work. Sara
Date: 10/23/2019 8:07:00 AM
Awww, a lovely heartwarming & heartfelt write, my friend
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Date: 10/19/2019 10:03:00 PM
Sara, I love this poem and I love your name. Have a nice week-end. -Richard
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Date: 10/19/2019 2:56:00 PM
Nicely done Sara. I love October too. We have so much to be thankful for. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/18/2019 9:25:00 PM
Hello Sara … certainly a lovely positive verse filled with gratitude. There are days when you must feel the love that steered you to who you are today - thank you Sara - Lindsay
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Date: 10/18/2019 2:21:00 PM
A lovely write...full of appreciation
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/19/2019 8:43:00 AM
Michael, Thanks for the visit to my page. Yes, I do appreciate what my parents did for me. Sara
Date: 10/18/2019 12:12:00 PM
Nice use of the Malaysian form! Thanks for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/19/2019 8:31:00 AM
Matthew, Your presence at my page is uplifting. I am glad that you gave me the exact name of the form. Sara

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