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Remembering Lida

While straightening the clutter in my cellar, I find the chest. Inside I see the drawings and scraps of papers - secret notes we’d passed to one another in our science class. We met as children. Startled, then amused, I laughed at her peculiar foreign accent; then we laughed our years through school together. (Our escapades were nearly criminal!) As foreign as dear Lida was her illness. It came just when our futures had seemed bright. With every operation that she faced, despair reflected deeper in her eyes. Immersed in recollections, I now sit and read our notes; I’ll clean another time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/3/2017 4:53:00 PM
Exquisite and very touching ... I've had a similar experience in life. Those memories are the truly precious things to treasure, and what we live FOR. Thank you for sharing - I love this! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 7/3/2017 4:25:00 PM
Great poem, Andrea--sweet and moving! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 6/5/2016 6:49:00 AM
Gee, so heartfelt. Reads like you had quite the friendship with Lida, and I am sorry she's no longer with us. I feel that she knew how much you cared. Great write, and congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2016 2:58:00 PM
I know that feeling when I look at old photos and get nostalgic. Congrats on your win, Andrea :)
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:04:00 PM
Andrea, the final thought "I'll clean another time" re-sounded the import of the memories "hidden" in the clutter. A wonderful write that should leave the readers.....reminiscing. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:43:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Andrea. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:58:00 PM
congrats on your 1st place win, this is such a touching one andrea, a lovely poem of friendship...new poem alert!! and there may be two others you haven't seen, blue evening and colours (collabo with john)
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:38:00 PM
Oh Andrea, this just brings tears to my eyes. You have me thinking about my high school best friend, I think I'll call her today and see how she is. Beautiful poem, congratulations on your first place win. Such an honour to share the place with someone as great as you. Love lee
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:43:00 AM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE WIN WITH WONDERFUL WORDS SO GRAND MY FRIEND...LUV..
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:36:00 AM
Good call. I would have done the same thing. Taking a few minutes to remember a friend is like cradling those memories, holding them close to your heart. Even if your hubby wouldn't approve, I bet Lida would :)
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Date: 9/19/2011 9:32:00 AM
It happens. Our memories sometimes are more important. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:29:00 AM
Andrea, I too had a close friend I grew up with who died shortly after she married at 18. Her name was Karen. It was so sad to lose her to illiness. I related to your well written poem. It was very moving. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:56:00 AM
Tough write...but you honor her well.:) 7 rate
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Date: 9/16/2011 4:26:00 PM
Good to read of your friend Andrea, and the memories, you still hold hope you do well in the contest..
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Date: 9/16/2011 2:18:00 PM
Nice tribute to your friend Andrea. I wrote one today and lately seems nothing is coming together with writing. I am at the shop again today and tonight work at the store. So a long day. Take care and good lucki in the contest. love phyl
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:57:00 PM
What a lovely tribute to your friend Lida. It's great that you have such fond memories of her, my friend
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Date: 9/16/2011 7:41:00 AM
Memories are a powerful part of what we are, and they can be triggered by all manner of things. A fine, evocative write. Hi Andrea, just dropping by to read one. I'm still not really at the Soup...won't be posting anything new until I get a new computer! I'm still writing though. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 9/16/2011 7:29:00 AM
A sad write here Andrea.Nicely expressed emotional feelings.Best wishes:)
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Date: 9/16/2011 7:25:00 AM
A sad write here Andrea.Nicely expressed emotional feelings.Best wishes:)
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:07:00 AM
Great write Carol! Wonderful, wonderful subject! Awesome poem!!
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:10:00 AM
Sorry, carol is the contest judge, sorry about that Andrea, I knew it was you but saw Carol's name at the bottom and yours not there...I made the error! Anyway good luck in the contest!!
Date: 9/15/2011 11:30:00 PM
A friend forever will never die. They're sweetly remembered with just a sigh. Unspoken love and tenderness. Is solemnly known, you no longer guess.
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:54:00 PM
A melancholy poem of a sad loss. Touching on little items tells well how it affected you. The mechanics of the poem are superb; I'd love to write so smoothly.
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:37:00 PM
Andie I LOVE iambic meter and I don't find metered writes sing songy...I guess I didn't express myself correctly as you said it the topic which is most important.You are one of the few poets who excells in meter and I admire that! light & love
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:06:00 PM
Andrea, I - and I'm sure many other soupers- really get this gem of yours. There is such a comfort in the little mementos left when loved ones die. Sometimes a ticket of an event attended together or a snapshot, cards, letters.... you captured the emotion so well, here- again, I love your un-convoluted approach, solid well chosen words- best of wishes in the contest. I am sure that Carol will love this! Cyndi
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