Remembering a Comedic Genius

Sadness becomes the pall over depression’s bleak coffin
Closing the florid lid on satin-encrusted chests of dismay
Where the stench of a life is entrusted to death and decay
Left in the hopeless depths of a dug-out trench, too often,
Then promptly forgotten unless one is renown, say, a star*
Whose life was made palatable by imaginative, fictional roles
Seen on the silver screen, or the editing room floor, souls
Of characters people like you and me can identify with afar.

Yes, sadness as vanquishing as the dying bloom thirsting
For water will eventually bend and wither overwhelmed
While no one ever asks why, not even I who am compelled
To confess with sadness my beleaguered heart is bursting.
No epitaph suffices for one reaching for twinkling stars
Comes crashing to a final exhalation covered with scars.


Written June 14, 2021
[*In Memory of the incredibly talented Robin Williams who
died by suicide caused by depression on August 11, 2014.]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 2:57 AM
This sonnet is incredible, as was Robin Williams, who remains to this day one of my all-time-favorite performers. I loved him best in Patch Adams.
Hankins Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Thanks, Caren. It just poured out. As I read it, I wonder where I came up with some of those images. Yes, Robin Williams was spectacularly talented, just a good guy, and it is so sad knowing how he was suffering inside.
Poet Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Superb write Milton, We never really know what is going on behind the laughter and grins. And I never honestly expected what is going on until the end of the poem that he commits suicide due to depression. Great job. Blessings and regards
Hankins Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Thank you so much, Lasaad, for your kind and sympathetic comment. Yes, it was a sad day when we lost Robin Williams.
Cunningham Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 1:48 AM
Well written Milton, he was truly a comic genius, behind the laughter and the smiles we never really know whats going on. Tom
Hankins Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Thanks so much for your affirming comment, Tom. Yes, indeed, he was. A tragic loss for the entire world.
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 11:44 PM
Great write , Robin Williams was an awesome person
Hankins Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 9:32 AM
He was, indeed, Eve. Thanks so much for your response.
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