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Remembering a Comedic Genius

Sadness becomes the pall over depression’s bleak coffin Closing the florid lid on satin-encrusted chests of dismay Where the stench of a life is entrusted to death and decay Left in the hopeless depths of a dug-out trench, too often, Then promptly forgotten unless one is renown, say, a star* Whose life was made palatable by imaginative, fictional roles Seen on the silver screen, or the editing room floor, souls Of characters people like you and me can identify with afar. Yes, sadness as vanquishing as the dying bloom thirsting For water will eventually bend and wither overwhelmed While no one ever asks why, not even I who am compelled To confess with sadness my beleaguered heart is bursting. No epitaph suffices for one reaching for twinkling stars Comes crashing to a final exhalation covered with scars. Written June 14, 2021 [*In Memory of the incredibly talented Robin Williams who died by suicide caused by depression on August 11, 2014.]

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Date: 6/17/2021 2:57:00 AM
This sonnet is incredible, as was Robin Williams, who remains to this day one of my all-time-favorite performers. I loved him best in Patch Adams.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/17/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. It just poured out. As I read it, I wonder where I came up with some of those images. Yes, Robin Williams was spectacularly talented, just a good guy, and it is so sad knowing how he was suffering inside.
Date: 6/15/2021 10:37:00 AM
Superb write Milton, We never really know what is going on behind the laughter and grins. And I never honestly expected what is going on until the end of the poem that he commits suicide due to depression. Great job. Blessings and regards
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/15/2021 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lasaad, for your kind and sympathetic comment. Yes, it was a sad day when we lost Robin Williams.
Date: 6/15/2021 1:48:00 AM
Well written Milton, he was truly a comic genius, behind the laughter and the smiles we never really know whats going on. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/15/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thanks so much for your affirming comment, Tom. Yes, indeed, he was. A tragic loss for the entire world.
Date: 6/14/2021 11:44:00 PM
Great write , Robin Williams was an awesome person
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/15/2021 9:32:00 AM
He was, indeed, Eve. Thanks so much for your response.

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