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Remember Yourself Premiere Contest Winner

I have stood on every shoreline Earth could grow— watched civilizations peel off like snakeskin, hands red and raw, throwing words into the wind. What was it, they asked, what was the answer? This morning, I walked into a diner in Kansas, found a cup of coffee that tasted like 1983, and sipped the ghosts of a thousand endings. People talk like birds now, high-pitched and fast, forgetting their wings. I remember sitting cross-legged in Greece, listening to poets invent gods out of clay. They believed the world was a fistful of stars scattered by children before bedtime, and that we were made to gather them. This last time, I come unmasked—no silver suit, no cryptic message carved in crop fields. I leave no warnings of doom, no demands for change. All I have is the echo that never leaves— a glittering hope beneath the static. The song that says: There’s life, there’s life—up here, down there, and somewhere between the lonely notes of what could have been and what still waits. I’ll take my place in the sky once more, watch as you blink back, eyes wide, and see what you’ve always been: Starmen too. Every one of you, already knowing the tune, just trying to remember the words.

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Date: 6/22/2025 8:20:00 PM
Hi Jaymee, Your poem is a radiant meditation on memory, myth, and human potential. Its language soars with cosmic wonder, yet lands with intimate grace, reminding us that the extraordinary has always been quietly nested within us. A moving, luminous piece. "All I have is the echo that never leaves A glittering hope beneath the static." —this feels like the heart of the poem: enduring and quiet optimistic :)
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Date: 11/24/2024 1:55:00 AM
Oh My ! this one made me cry. Jaymee your wonderful congrats !
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/24/2024 10:16:00 PM
You're too kind, Mystic. This one had a lot of rewrites trying to find its direction. I feel honored that it landed with you. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and encourage my work. I sincerely appreciate it.
Date: 11/22/2024 10:23:00 PM
"I leave no warnings of doom, no demands for change. All I have is the echo that never leaves— a glittering hope beneath the static." Love these lines. A poem of great depth, the imagery, vivid and the language, rich and evocative! Congratulations Jaymee on your top trophy win.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/24/2024 10:14:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa. You're always so encouraging, and I appreciate it so much. And thanks for the congratulations. Despite all of our poetic principles, it is exciting to win a thing sometimes xD
Date: 11/22/2024 8:06:00 PM
Deep Buddha-write. Warmest congratulations on the well deserved trophy win, with this exquisite, soulful write, Jaymee, God bless
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/24/2024 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker. That's really high praise, and I sincerely appreciate it. And thanks for taking the time to read my piece and comment :)
Date: 11/22/2024 2:21:00 PM
Oh My Goodness this is amazing!!! SO beautiful and personal it is just simply amazing and 100 percent deserving of the top spot in this contest, congrats a new fav of mine
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/22/2024 2:57:00 PM
Stahhhhp that! But also, THANK YOU for such a lovely comment. I'm going to come back here and read this when I'm feeling blue. Have a wonderful weekend :)
Date: 11/22/2024 10:46:00 AM
Great writing. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/22/2024 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. You are such a great writer and so encouraging. I appreciate your time to comment. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 11/22/2024 10:01:00 AM
Very well done, Jaymee. Congratulations.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/22/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thanks, Jim. It was a great prompt :)
Date: 11/22/2024 8:38:00 AM
It's always so cool to see who wrote what after a contest is over. A few you bump into but most are a nice surprise. Not surprised though that you're on top here, you are a wonderful poet. Gosh, if you just corresponded more your excellent poetry could be experienced by many others. Anyway, my fave part here is stanza four, particularly this, "I have no warnings of doom, no demands for change. All I have is the echo that never leaves, a glittering hope beneath the static."
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 11/22/2024 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Tbh, it was a great prompt and one I hadn't thought to write about. I'm a big fan of utopian sci-fi and this let me explore that. I do hope to become more active in this interesting community - at least in the month of December when I have time off :) Have a great weekend and thanks again.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/22/2024 8:38:00 AM
An unbiased observer who simply wishes the best for humanity. Outstanding

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