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Remember the Day

Remember the day Remember the day, back when we were young and on our own Carefree was the way, restless hearts who sang the very same songs Hung up on our youthful desires Adding fuel creating fires When desperate ambition inspired Remember the day, when we thought we were invincible but now the truth is oh so clear we were foolish and invisible oh yeah! It's been a long, long, time, my life, has passed me by my hopes and dreams all fade away I'll save what's left for another day Chorus Tomorrow is a better day Tomorrow is not far away Just a turning world away Hope it's not another rainy day Hope it's not... Chorus repeat John Derek Hamilton October 1, 2016

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Date: 10/6/2016 3:28:00 PM
I was going to say sounds like a song, I missed the 'lyric' part. Sorry I'm new, I'll get it together sooner or later. Anyway, great tune and so so true how the fire needs to be rekindled otherwise it's lights out on the relationship.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/6/2016 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Paloma
Date: 10/4/2016 9:06:00 AM
I like the chorus, John:) very nice lyric:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/4/2016 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Jo
Date: 10/2/2016 12:05:00 PM
Another lovely lyric :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/2/2016 4:17:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 10/1/2016 11:18:00 PM
Very good lyric, John, good luck in the contest :-)
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/2/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Eve

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