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Premiere Contest WinnerRemember Me

Remember me through poetry For poesy's my legacy Poems for you I leave behind Engage your heart, your soul and mind Remember me, when the wind laughs For there, I've left my autographs When the zephyr tickles your cheek Memories will flow, hear me speak Remember me, when seasons shift In recollections, catch my drift When Summer turns to Winter pale I'll be there in the stormy gale Remember me, when music flows A part of life in highs and lows I am the unsung song you hear That timid voice, now loud and clear Remember me, when sunrays dance Don't forget me, give me a glance I'm the light in dappled shadows The sparkle in sunlit meadows Remember me, when the rain pours In the drizzle, I am all yours Catch me in reminiscences I've crossed the murky distances Remember me, when flowers bloom When their aroma fills the room I'm alive in each open bud I'm the crimson rose's lifeblood Remember me in silent nights When darkness overcomes the lights I'm the shine of the farthest star The moonbeams prancing from afar Remember me, forget me not I am the story and the plot In every twist of your old book I am hidden, just take a look In every word that you spell out I'm the whisper, no need to shout People will say, "Just leave her be" But I tell you, "Remember me".
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Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 4:50 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K.
Kauffman Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 12:24 PM
Beryl, congratulations on your trophy win with this elegant, rhyming poem that reminds us to remember in every element of nature's life - to be aware and to "remember!" Sending you blessings and a long term memory!
Scott Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 3:11 AM
Well love the rhyme verses xx
Volumes Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 3:36 AM
A fave ! Gave me a tingling feeling as I read. I often read the poems I have placed on my favorites list, as they are all spectacular poetry. This one now takes pride of place at the top of my list. Thank you.
Canerdy Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 7:03 AM
Joanna, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this excellent, moving poem. You have used a series of very creative metaphors. Janice
Danita Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 3:23 AM
Remember me when sunrays dance, Don't forget me, give me a glance- Your construct is moving Joanna. Congratulations
Jones Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:59 PM
This poem is so awesome it is THE number one poem on the Poetry Soup 100 best new poems list as of today! Congratulations!
Gibbons Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 10:01 AM
Back to say A fav of mine today .x
Gibbons Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 10:00 AM
Wow a well deserved win Joanna Congratulations. ~ Music is my passion and inspiration alot of time. I do pray someone remembers me like this. I loved I could read it then sat with my eyes closed and listened to it sung. So very inspirational indeed hugs <3
George Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 6:15 AM
Back to your poem with hearty congratulations on your trophy win, dear Joanna. Well deserved.
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:50 PM
Wonderful poem and wonderful trophy win. We all want to be remembered this way. Congrats to you
Layne Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 8:49 PM
This was beautiful, Joanna. Congratulations!
Godwin Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 11:34 AM
EXCELLENT, my emotional side and my poetry love both soared with the beauty in the flow, the simple rhymes delivering complexities by each lines end and emphatically radiating with confidence about what they are saying. The last stanza sealed the wonderful poem BEAUTIFULLY, IMPACTFULLY and delighted me. I think I've told you this before; where you were once a very good poet, you are now, and have been for some time, an excellent poet consistently delivering same. No pressure, Joanna. CONGRATS
Peck Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 9:15 AM
Your poem is wonderful--just what we would all like to say! Congratulations on first place!
Brul Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:13 AM
I definitely agree with Silent One. This masterpiece captured my heart from line one until the end. Congratulations on a well-deserved trophy win!^___^ A fave !!
Anaya Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 7:32 PM
Joanna, each quatrain threaded, shines through with such care. Congratulations on your tropphy! This I'll fave, for sure. Blessings
Smith  Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Well deserved.
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 11:28 AM
This is my fave, Joanna. Many of your words were really touching to me. The essence of the subject was perfectly captured. Congratulations on winning the trophy!
One Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 10:14 AM
You have written so many wonderful lines using subjects that we remember people by... like nature, music, scents the weather and of course flowers... Congratulations on your deserving first place in my contest...
One Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 10:12 AM
You had me from the first sentence.. Is that not what all poets want? For their poetic legacy to be remembered? That is why we use places like poetry soup as anthology, so when we are gone, our ancestors can read our words and maybe then they may understand, as poetry is normally that what we cannot speak... Wow, Joanna, this is a fave for me... Loved so many lines in your poem... You captured the essence of the theme perfectly and it was like you wrote how I felt..
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 6:29 PM
Thank you very much, SO:) a pleasant surprise to win the trophy:) praise the Lord:)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 2:31 AM
Joanna, I can never forget your poetry. It is always so flowing. Best for a win.
Cunningham Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 6:35 AM
Beautiful Joanna, love the song too, have done a few poems on suno, its lovely to hear your words as lyrics for a song. It brings them to life. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 4:28 AM
Joanna, I hope you are remembered in so many ways by those who have been privileged to know you. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Radice Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 3:22 AM
It's a lovely poem for sure Joanna. I took a listen to the generated song and it adds a new dimension to it all. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary
Empress Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 2:36 AM
Wow this is beautiful and hits home for me poetic soul joanna, I especially felt and resonated with “I am the story and the plot In every twist of your old book I am hidden, just take a look” wow! I think many poets would love this one! Its a fave for me! I just love your metaphors and even the refrain creates a very melodic cadence! Absolutely loved reading this! Sending you light always
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