Relief

Relief

She takes to bed,
winds round his
erstwhile ardent pillow

cooled now by the
meter of cruelty’s clock;
sheets spoilt by life’s air;

she recalls the scent
of him, the pre-washed
grime of his shirt.

Yearning wrings convulse;
fill eyes beneath 
quivering lids.

Coax her, blessèd
breeze;  take her to the 
limbo of pain

where slumber’s analgesic 
can soothe the emery
of remembering. 

©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
May 15, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Kathryn. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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May 22, 2012 at 8:34 PM
Oh, so painful, no, I meant pain filled... and yet lovely. I wrote once about how I feel like a vulture sometimes, reading poetry, that I have failed to spend time with the writer in their heartbreak, their misery because they have delighted me with their words, their RENDERING. It is the plight of poets. I am so sorry for what you experienced yet clap for the art... too much too love here even to pick a line. Completely publish worthy. Literary quality... hugs, dear, happy and sad.
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today...Very descriptive, expressive, and emotive..I could feel your pain..Thanks for stopping by..I too enjoy the sounds of wind and rain..It is relaxing..Sara
Austin Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 10:52 AM
"Slumber's analgesic," ah yes. Your style, here, is fascinating, refreshing. Love, daver
Eastman Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 8:04 AM
I love your wording, phrasing, and flow... a very interesting write.
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May 16, 2012 at 7:36 AM
'...the meter of cruelty's clock,' '...the emery of remembering,' such strong phrasing... this is some piece, with stark, vivid imagery and excellent construction. Well done, Keith
Collins Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Keith. I'm smiling ear to ear. Kathy
Horsman Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 3:04 PM
like this wonderful poem, such imagery, and it is different. harry
Collins Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Thank Harry for your kind encouragement. Kathy
Williams Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:43 AM
ha you were reading mine,while I was reading yours ha ha ha.........
Collins Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:57 AM
Thanks David. Paranormal.
Williams Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:42 AM
Kathy, this is superb reading, flows wonderfully, I love it..David
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