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Relief She takes to bed, winds round his erstwhile ardent pillow cooled now by the meter of cruelty’s clock; sheets spoilt by life’s air; she recalls the scent of him, the pre-washed grime of his shirt. Yearning wrings convulse; fill eyes beneath quivering lids. Coax her, blessèd breeze; take her to the limbo of pain where slumber’s analgesic can soothe the emery of remembering. ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins May 15, 2012

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Date: 7/13/2012 8:12:00 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Kathryn. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:34:00 PM
Oh, so painful, no, I meant pain filled... and yet lovely. I wrote once about how I feel like a vulture sometimes, reading poetry, that I have failed to spend time with the writer in their heartbreak, their misery because they have delighted me with their words, their RENDERING. It is the plight of poets. I am so sorry for what you experienced yet clap for the art... too much too love here even to pick a line. Completely publish worthy. Literary quality... hugs, dear, happy and sad.
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Date: 5/20/2012 2:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today...Very descriptive, expressive, and emotive..I could feel your pain..Thanks for stopping by..I too enjoy the sounds of wind and rain..It is relaxing..Sara
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Date: 5/20/2012 10:52:00 AM
"Slumber's analgesic," ah yes. Your style, here, is fascinating, refreshing. Love, daver
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Date: 5/19/2012 8:04:00 AM
I love your wording, phrasing, and flow... a very interesting write.
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Date: 5/16/2012 7:36:00 AM
'...the meter of cruelty's clock,' '...the emery of remembering,' such strong phrasing... this is some piece, with stark, vivid imagery and excellent construction. Well done, Keith
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 5/16/2012 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Keith. I'm smiling ear to ear. Kathy
Date: 5/15/2012 3:04:00 PM
like this wonderful poem, such imagery, and it is different. harry
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 5/16/2012 6:56:00 AM
Thank Harry for your kind encouragement. Kathy
Date: 5/15/2012 9:43:00 AM
ha you were reading mine,while I was reading yours ha ha ha.........
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 5/16/2012 6:57:00 AM
Thanks David. Paranormal.
Date: 5/15/2012 9:42:00 AM
Kathy, this is superb reading, flows wonderfully, I love it..David
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