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Relentless

Round and round on this crazy ride Stolen dreams stolen pride Lift me up than slam me down Here we go round and round Love me love me with all your spite Round and round watch me hold on tight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/2/2008 9:02:00 PM
Actually, I know about people who seem to love/hate each other and I did like this poem, it was nice and short and the repetition of words round and stolen made it seem almost like a child's chant. For some reason, this works here.
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