Relentless

Round and round on this crazy ride
Stolen dreams stolen pride
Lift me up than slam me down
Here we go round and round 
Love me love me with all your spite
Round and round watch me hold on tight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 2, 2008 at 9:02 PM
Actually, I know about people who seem to love/hate each other and I did like this poem, it was nice and short and the repetition of words round and stolen made it seem almost like a child's chant. For some reason, this works here.
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