Notes About The Poem

 

 

 

POTD poem: Feb 9th 2024

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Rekindled Love - POTD

Up on the sliding hill in the atmospheric river rain,
Captivating eyes of beauty, smile to me again.

Eyes full of rainy deluge, drenching in cold, over heart’s fire,
Like greening of balding hills, rekindle my waning desire.

Like the little birds over tall trees, swinging in wind, take flight,
Even though the rain falls like avalanche with full might.

Pre spring sprouting daffodils and tulips get run over by windy rain,
Yet they rise again and again, like my thoughts of seeing you again.

Who would not love you, seeing you move,
Warm-eyed and beautiful through the green alpine grove.

Let the rain drench you, flow thru your hair,
My love will rise like phoenix, and embrace you there.

Laugh if my cheek is misty and drips,
Wetness is tender, laugh on my lips.

The happy sweet laughter of love with pain,
Rekindled love, the strong love, burning in the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Goldsmith Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 1:31 PM
Congratulation on your new win. I enjoyed reading your write again. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
Volumes Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 8:39 PM
Truly beautiful poem Jay.Congrats on the POTD Best wishes from Wen
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 1:57 PM
Congratulations on POTD! :)
Williams Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 8:54 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, a lovely write...Maria
Nicole Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 7:30 PM
I completely agree, the falling rain seems to create such a beautiful mood. Emotions within are soft, sensual and romantic. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Anaya Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 4:56 PM
Hey Jay, Congratulations on your POTD! Passion burns with imagery of nature's beautiful things. Romantic sets of couplets! Enjoy your day!
May Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 2:20 PM
Congrats on POTYD, Very nicely penned
Greenhough Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD. This was a swirling dance of romance through poetic words. I enjoyed reading.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Rekindled Love" write again. Have a fun day writing away with your win....................
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 11:21 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your well-deserved p.o.t.d. ... hope you have enjoyed many greetings today ... woow - Have a lovely weekend, Jay :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jay! The imagery in your poem was engaging and the passionate love was pleasing to read about. Excellent poetry, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
Pandit Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 6:55 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Jay. Much enjoyed the sweet voice of your lovesome poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 6:28 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
Sands Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Very nice :)
Kaufman Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 4:39 AM
Dear Jay, What a fantastic and emotive poem you have penned sir, just in time for Valentines Day too. I loved the way you contrasted seasonal changes with the ups and downs of this love connection. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. I truly enjoyed it.
Rodgers Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Dear Jay, Congrats on POTD! You portray a stunning picture of love weathering a storm. The sliding hill, captivating eyes, and deluge of rain set the scene for a powerful emotional journey. I loved the imagery of rekindling desire and the comparison of rising thoughts to spring flowers pushing through rain. The closing lines about embracing through the rain, with laughter echoing love's strength, brought a beautiful warmth. Love can endure even the harshest downpours. Beautiful! - Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 3:38 AM
Jay, a beautiful romantic poem, congratulations on POTD.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Wonderful romantic poetry Jay, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day. Beryl
Seeker Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Oh wow!what a beautiful love poem, Jay! “Let the rain drench you, flow thru your hair, My love will rise like phoenix, and embrace you there.” ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
Bowring Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 3:00 AM
Many congratulations with POTD Jay with this very beautiful, romantic poem. It’s so gorgeously written with wonderful poetic lines full of stunning imagery. I cannot single out any one particular line as they are all stunning. Loved it! Enjoy your celebratory day. Blessings to you.
Jones Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 12:36 AM
Wonderfully written and romantic! Congratulations on potd!
Cunningham Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 12:36 AM
Very romantic lines Jay, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Volumes Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 8:54 PM
Beautiful Love story Jay. Brightened my day. You will touch a lot of hearts with the wonderful way you wrote this. Best wishes from Wen
George Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 7:26 PM
What a lovely poem of love and romance! I cannot single out any one couplet I love more than the others. All are equally captivating. Still, I feel this is the best "Eyes full of rainy deluge, drenching in cold, over heart’s fire, Like greening of balding hills, rekindle my waning desire......" Straight into my FAVE
Andresen Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 10:15 AM
- Spring is the time for romance ... so true ... the strong love, burning even in the rain ... a beautiful poem, Jay :) - Enjoy reading :) - hugs
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace