Regret Me

Lost my way within the storms of rage Searching for a clearing Some kind of forgiveness Still browsing the categories of my past Trying to read more into what has already be written Escaping reality's grasp Letting my mind wander endlessly in the realms of fear Still trying to relive moments of time forgotten by others Unable to bear witness to regret Captivated in it's trance Me; slowly disappearing till my body dust will be.

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Katie-Jayne Boardman

Date: 11/26/2013 10:48:00 PM

Hi David. I really like the use of the word "categories". It is unique. And this line communicates very well the futileness of trying to live in the past: Still trying to relive moments of time forgotten by other. (Well that was my interpretation anyway). Very expressive poem, thanks for sharing.