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Refuge

I hid in plain sight Mocked the censors Defied the preachers Chuckled At their ineptitude Took refuge In the blank page Hiding myself In swirling lines Dancing Along the borders Of truth Cursed them In muted metaphor Defied them In metered verse Challenged them In rebellious rhyme Laughed as they counted Syllables and iambs Punctuated My verses freedom For they were frozen And I a seething cauldron Of love and hate Struggling youth Battling The lunacy of life’s Illusions Thus I wrote And hid In plain sight On a blank page 4/3/2023 Writing Challenge – ‘R’ Words Poetry Contest Constance LaFrance - sponsor

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Date: 4/8/2023 10:40:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win John! :)
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Date: 4/8/2023 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, John! … Took refuge In the blank page Hiding myself In swirling lines
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Date: 4/7/2023 12:58:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, John :) - hugs
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Date: 4/6/2023 8:33:00 PM
John, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! And congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor. !
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Date: 4/5/2023 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 4/5/2023 8:01:00 PM
John, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 4/5/2023 5:43:00 PM
"I wrote and hid in plain sight, on a blank page." I love everything about this thought, because it's sooooo true ! ! Counting Syllables and Meter- all in a day of writing Poetry. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/5/2023 2:08:00 PM
A brilliant piece, John. Each line is deep and thought-provoking. Congratulations on your POTD. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/5/2023 12:47:00 PM
a Tour de Force
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Date: 4/5/2023 11:33:00 AM
Wonderful words and truly worthy of POTD and even more. So cleverly written and so relatable. I stand and applaud.
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Date: 4/5/2023 11:32:00 AM
Love it, John...especially the 2nd and 3rd stanzas. A great selection for POTD, and BOL in the contest.
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Date: 4/5/2023 11:16:00 AM
Great write, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 4/5/2023 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations John on receiving the honour of poem of the day with this write on the lunacy of life’s illusions… Belle
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Date: 4/5/2023 8:59:00 AM
A fitting POTD indeed. Quite worthy and evocative. Much truth to be sure, John. ~;o]
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:53:00 AM
Powerful poem to ponder on, John. Favorite line ... "The lunacy of life’s Illusions". So full of possibilities. Congratulations on your POTD honor! Write On! Bill
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:15:00 AM
Good for you John! :) Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:02:00 AM
Excellent POTD.. Congratulations John. Enjoy :)
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Date: 4/5/2023 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Love the ending. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 4/5/2023 6:40:00 AM
Heh, heh -- another top-drawer entry from John Lawless, aka William Witsworth... Congrats on POTD, sir!
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Date: 4/5/2023 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations John on POTD honors. Well deserved!
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Date: 4/5/2023 3:48:00 AM
John, congratulations on POTD, a great poem!
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Date: 4/5/2023 3:32:00 AM
The confusion and chaos, the desire to question everything, seeing ineptitude in those who parade their prowess... all these, so characteristic of youth are so powerfully delineated. Well Done ! Congratulations John on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 4/5/2023 2:58:00 AM
Pushing the boundaries in plain sight on a blank page, hell why not! it’s what poets do each day, only some more esoteric than others, brilliant piece here John, and deserving of POTD, congratulations cheers David
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Date: 4/5/2023 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your expressive thoughts on refuge, John. "Battling the lunacy of life's illusions" That's a line worthy of potd on its own.
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Date: 4/5/2023 2:03:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., John :) - Happy Easter - hugs
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