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Reflections

Back home, I ponder long on life. Death is so final, no return. I sit alone on my sheltered cosy porch, And think of spring forget-me-nots, Of roses dark as festive damask, And swaying poppies red and gold. Of summer figs and yellow gourds, Of sweet delicious melons, And mouth-watering peaches Syrupy and luscious and juicy, While sunsets turned to red And moons shone on my love. So I will not bid her goodbye. Others may wail, lament and cry. I shall live on, unattended And relive the happy endless days, The haunting lullabies of my love.

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Date: 4/15/2024 10:33:00 AM
Hi Victor: This is a spectacular poem. The richness of the images and the layers of mood are very touching. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 4/15/2024 5:49:00 AM
Dear Victor, it’s lovely that you relive those happy endless days and are soothed by lullabies of your love. The moon still shines on you with love from heaven above. Beautiful reflections… Beryl
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:56:00 PM
love all the color you've created. beautiful, hugs dear friend
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:43:00 AM
Deep and emotive reflections dear Victor..
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:38:00 AM
A lovely reflection on life and love, Victor:)
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:15:00 AM
You had me at the first 2 lines, this poem sure resonates with me these days.
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Date: 4/12/2024 9:48:00 PM
A touching and beautiful poem of precious reminiscence. I love the imagery. This is a fave. :)
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Date: 4/12/2024 5:26:00 PM
A true Love poem, Victor. She would be proud of you for remembering the golden days of your love and for being strong and drawing from your Love for her to carry on. Blessings my friend. A FAV for my list. Bill
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Date: 4/12/2024 4:56:00 PM
Not only did you capture beautiful, reflective moments, you added that special touch 'living unattended...the haunting lullabies of my love.' You are wise to reflect and relive those days spent with your true love. This is a touching poem with beautiful imagery. Am faving. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/12/2024 10:21:00 AM
Impressive piece of writing, Victor. You have captured the essence of daily life, evoking a range of emotions.
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Date: 4/12/2024 9:23:00 AM
Wow this is amazing , Victor. A fave for me.
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Date: 4/12/2024 8:28:00 AM
So beautiful, poignant, romantic, imagery-packed! Blessings, dear one ~ Kim
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Date: 4/12/2024 6:56:00 AM
"So I will not bid her goodbye. Others may wail, lament and cry. I shall live on, unattended And relive the happy endless days, The haunting lullabies of my love." -- very beautiful. The spirit of a Poet in full, endless bloom!
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Date: 4/12/2024 5:48:00 AM
Wonderfully reflective write, Victor. I felt the tenor of mixed emotions through your words--so true to real life.
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Date: 4/12/2024 3:37:00 AM
Ahhh!! So romantic. A love that gets deeper with the years remembered and held dear. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/12/2024 2:14:00 AM
- A heartfelt poem ... beautifully written, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/12/2024 1:53:00 AM
This is so beautiful and so very touching! I love the flow of your words dear victor, and the ending shows strength too! I especially love “Of roses dark as festive damask, And swaying poppies red and gold.” Wow! Roses dark as festive damask! Thats unique! Pleasure reading this heartfelt poem! Sending you light
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Date: 4/12/2024 1:19:00 AM
Simply beautiful. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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