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Reflection of the Woman

We are exploited in a stagnant society. I REFUSE to adhere to the notion that WOMEN. ARE. STRONG. But this is a fact: The rusty shackles of tradition bind our delicate hips and necks, thin wrists and ankles. My mother says that LIFE. IS. UNFAIR. I will NOT welcome the idea that this time, patriarchy and stereotypes and gender roles can be stopped by our raw power. I believe that we are merely beauty, child-bearers, physical disadvantages, cooks, household confinement. NO longer can it be said that FREEDOM. IS. ATTAINABLE. I now know that I am characterized by DAUGHTER, EMOTIONAL, WEAK, GO WEAR SKIRTS, BECOME PRETTY, Because I am below the strong male that can control with the very snap of his fingers. I will never again cling to the idea that THERE. IS. HOPE. FOR. US. But the truth is in reverse (read the poem from the bottom line to the top).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/3/2015 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Melissa.
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Date: 12/1/2015 6:42:00 AM
Greetings Melissa. Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-) It is emotional though.....
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:23:00 PM
Melissa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:56:00 PM
Congrats on ur lovely win Melissa with this great write!
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Date: 11/29/2015 3:18:00 PM
Melissa, Congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 11/24/2015 6:15:00 PM
Hi Melissa, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:56:00 PM
Melissa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/23/2015 12:11:00 PM
- A nice first poem Melissa, I look forward to become more familiar with your poems in the future - Welcome to "The soup" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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