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REFLECTION

**REFLECTION** Running through a wheat dream Clear skies, worms and flies, my face cries Surrounded by silver streams I stumbled into a valley where sleepness never dies A manger on fire, burning embryo of lies no time for final good-bye's Waking up alone in the middle of a field Rain falls from the sky, to bless my soul Above the silver lining of mirrored clouds I lay a bouquet of flowers on your grave Angered by the thought of my birth Where has my salvation gone? Rescued by the hand, of the one I can not see Tormented in life's final step Silent mistreated never understand Arid of hate dooming everyday Something evil ruins the last hold of my hand My mouth hit by the door, when I pray A ricochet shot when my life was revealed Fallen in and out, after unwanted betrayal tounges Alone with my reflection is where I stand Broken Mirrors, the only thing I see! 7 years of current bad luck. *

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Date: 6/4/2020 3:16:00 PM
Skat A. Beautiful poem. I Came back to poetrysoup after some time and I was checking your poems. You haven't posted a poem for a while, do you still come to poetrysoup.com?
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Date: 5/5/2020 6:30:00 AM
Skat A i'm speechless , came back to poetry soup just today after 4 years of living on the fast lane and all. this poem I adore pretty much sums up my life
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Date: 2/15/2020 8:19:00 PM
Very nice work Skat A. I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 1/1/2020 6:16:00 PM
Can relate to this poem as sometimes feel I Broken I pile of mirrors from the one I last smashed upon the top
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Date: 2/20/2019 4:55:00 PM
Hello Skat A. yes break a mirror and it is 7 years of bad luck.So be careful. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/19/2019 9:04:00 PM
Such a meaningful and heartfelt poem. Its imagery adds vigor to our senses.
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Date: 2/20/2018 10:56:00 PM
One of the best that I've read here.
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Date: 2/3/2018 2:13:00 AM
Re-read this gem again, SKAT ... just as soul-stirring as the first time. I got another layer of meaning from this second read. Love and more love always.
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Date: 1/18/2018 6:50:00 PM
Seamless sincerity at its finest, I hope your luck changes( or another's if it is not you), great poem SKAT. Glad to see you around these Days);-)
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Date: 12/24/2017 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful write. I love the wordings and the style.
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Date: 10/4/2017 2:47:00 PM
Lovely string of pearls thoughts, Skat. Superstitions does make one pay, eh. Splendid poem. Love and smiles.
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:55:00 PM
:) love to read your work, Skat.. Hope you and Linda are doing well miss you both ~`*
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Date: 6/10/2017 8:07:00 AM
This was a gorgeous read for me, I love it.
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Date: 2/16/2017 11:33:00 PM
I love it.
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Date: 10/25/2016 1:53:00 AM
Nicely written verses! Thanks for the welcoming love. Nice to see some people still enjoy writing and reading others writing in this age of the internet and instant gratification.
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:51:00 AM
Excellent Write!! Best Congratulations SKAT!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 7/20/2016 11:33:00 AM
This is just wonderful,Skat. I truly enjoyed this one. Not to say I didn't enjoy your other pieces, but this struck me as my mirrors just....continued to break. I also wanted to thank you for your welcome. I appreciated that very much*smiles
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Date: 7/17/2016 4:38:00 PM
This is a Great piece of ART WORK. TERRIFIC AND BEAUTIFUL REGARDS OVI
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Date: 7/13/2016 5:49:00 AM
Yes a great poem Skat .intelligent and moving. A lovely 7.it was a very sad goodbye
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Date: 7/8/2016 6:26:00 AM
Great poem SKAT. Thanks for all the encouraging comments on mine.
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Date: 6/9/2016 9:20:00 AM
Hmm, hope the "Broken Mirrors" with their so-called 7-yr bad luck has run out of steam for you. But keep on with your writing these images of "wheat dreams" (such a captivating thought), you take me on a journey of reflection too, with my own memories.
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Date: 6/8/2016 5:50:00 AM
Excellent poem!
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Date: 6/7/2016 5:51:00 AM
Your work elicits a certain pathos of spirit. It does speak to me.
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Date: 6/1/2016 1:35:00 AM
quite impressive thought and is really interesting.! as a new poet to the soup, i am really glad to be your friend..! reflect on with more and more ideas, I encourage you!
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Date: 4/22/2016 3:54:00 PM
Wow pure talent I'm a mear mortal upon this earth Reading your creative passion so pure thank you For letting me read today such skill and passion for all to see lots love xxx
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