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REFLECTION

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REFLECTION

**REFLECTION**

Running through a wheat dream
Clear skies, worms and flies, my face cries
Surrounded by silver streams
I stumbled into a valley where sleepness never dies
A manger on fire, burning embryo of lies
no time for final good-bye's

Waking up alone in the middle of a field
Rain falls from the sky, to bless my soul
Above the silver lining of mirrored clouds
I lay a bouquet of flowers on your grave
Angered by the thought of my birth
Where has my salvation gone?

Rescued by the hand, of the one I can not see
Tormented in life's final step 
Silent mistreated never understand
Arid of hate dooming everyday
Something evil ruins the last hold of my hand
My mouth hit by the door, when I pray
A ricochet shot when my life was revealed 
Fallen in and out, after unwanted betrayal tounges 
Alone with my reflection is where I stand
Broken Mirrors, 
the only thing I see!
7 years of current bad luck.

*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 6/10/2017 8:07:00 AM
This was a gorgeous read for me, I love it.
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Date: 2/16/2017 11:33:00 PM
I love it.
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Date: 10/25/2016 1:53:00 AM
Nicely written verses! Thanks for the welcoming love. Nice to see some people still enjoy writing and reading others writing in this age of the internet and instant gratification.
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:51:00 AM
Excellent Write!! Best Congratulations SKAT!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 7/20/2016 11:33:00 AM
This is just wonderful,Skat. I truly enjoyed this one. Not to say I didn't enjoy your other pieces, but this struck me as my mirrors just....continued to break. I also wanted to thank you for your welcome. I appreciated that very much*smiles
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Date: 7/17/2016 4:38:00 PM
This is a Great piece of ART WORK. TERRIFIC AND BEAUTIFUL REGARDS OVI
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Date: 7/13/2016 5:49:00 AM
Yes a great poem Skat .intelligent and moving. A lovely 7.it was a very sad goodbye
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Date: 7/8/2016 6:26:00 AM
Great poem SKAT. Thanks for all the encouraging comments on mine.
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Date: 6/9/2016 9:20:00 AM
Hmm, hope the "Broken Mirrors" with their so-called 7-yr bad luck has run out of steam for you. But keep on with your writing these images of "wheat dreams" (such a captivating thought), you take me on a journey of reflection too, with my own memories.
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Date: 6/8/2016 5:50:00 AM
Excellent poem!
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Date: 6/7/2016 5:51:00 AM
Your work elicits a certain pathos of spirit. It does speak to me.
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Date: 6/1/2016 1:35:00 AM
quite impressive thought and is really interesting.! as a new poet to the soup, i am really glad to be your friend..! reflect on with more and more ideas, I encourage you!
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Date: 4/22/2016 3:54:00 PM
Wow pure talent I'm a mear mortal upon this earth Reading your creative passion so pure thank you For letting me read today such skill and passion for all to see lots love xxx
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Date: 4/20/2016 10:16:00 AM
What a powerful and deep write. Your views are well reflected here. A great write. It is my pleasure to read such a amazing write...........hugs
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:11:00 AM
Very strong great write!
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:56:00 PM
So expressive! This is well written!
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Date: 2/6/2016 10:47:00 AM
Such a strong write, it is full of meaning.
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Date: 1/19/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome ?? I really like this poem. It feels like your taking me through a journey from beginning to end. ?? Can't wait to read your other poems!
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Date: 1/14/2016 3:21:00 AM
great mind
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Date: 1/11/2016 12:20:00 PM
So very powerful in its imagery, awesome write
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:12:00 PM
Brilliant. I love imagery. Cheers.
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Date: 12/29/2015 9:41:00 PM
Thanks for congrds. Your poems are great I will learn from yours. Broken Wings is having contest you should enter. I wrote my first poem that wasn't funny for her contest. Feels weird putting my mind there tks
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:29:00 AM
Loved the poem and thank you for your comment on mine!
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Date: 12/2/2015 3:10:00 PM
Hey SKAT, this is just the height of your poetry, I can say. After reading it I felt myself soul searching.
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Date: 12/1/2015 8:59:00 AM
Beautifully Alive, S.
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