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Reflecting the Wonder

~ A creamsicle skyline of orange and white Frozen desires in dawn’s early light Then as I witness the first hint of blue My mind starts to wander to visions of you On the horizon as I start the day To shimmer my thoughts in a magical way Your sapphire eyes that I so long to trace The glow that I find in the smile on your face As crystalline shapes glitter soft on the ground Reflecting the wonder my thoughts they have found For here in this sunrise I find it is true My beautiful mornings will always be you ~

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Date: 11/5/2019 10:40:00 PM

A heavenly piece of imagery and devotion, my friend ~

Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2019 7:50:00 AM

Smiling here because of your wonderful comment my friend. Thank you so much.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/5/2019 9:13:00 PM

So romantic. I love it.

Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thank you so very much Juliet. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2019 9:00:00 PM

Vintage Romantic Write from the Master. I so enjoy these, picturing myself (LOL) as a 'Love Interest' lapping up every luscious line. Bravo, Chris! ~ Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2019 7:49:00 AM

Hey, you never know my friend. : ) Thanks so much Gershon.

John Hamilton

Date: 11/5/2019 4:58:00 PM

Very nice Chris, I never tire of your beautiful writes...crystalline shapes glitter on the ground, don't tell me it snows in Texas!

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 5:09:00 PM

Every three or four years we will get a snow day here, but that is about it, one day and then it's gone. Thanks my friend.

Darrell Rose

Date: 11/5/2019 2:35:00 PM

A smooth and consistent flow make this a pleasurable read. I always appreciate the passionate imagery found and expressed among the true poets of world. It is always interesting to read someone else’s work and experience it as if it was born of our own spirit.

Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 3:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Darrell. I am glad you liked this. I appreciate your visit today and your nice comment about my work. It is fun to read all of the different styles on a site like this.