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Reflecting Skies:

In the twilight Of her eyes, There was magic, Of reflecting skies, In the tenderness Of her touch, I find realism, O so much. And in her loving And soft voice, I fly to the heavens As I rejoice. As for her smile, It does belong, In every part Of my love song. /|\

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Date: 4/27/2017 10:53:00 AM
Short and sweet..... and a real treat !!
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Date: 4/27/2017 5:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lenna /|\
Date: 1/4/2017 2:01:00 PM
A lovely poem x poetry in motion x
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Date: 12/23/2016 5:39:00 PM
You created a lovely romantic poem here, Rick. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 12/21/2016 9:51:00 AM
Perfectly sweet, Rick. I can see this as a beautiful love based greeting card with 'her' changed to 'you'. It would work beautifully and what woman wouldn't be happy to receive such admiration in such a lovely write ... CayCay
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Date: 12/21/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay /|\
Date: 12/20/2016 10:13:00 AM
I absolutely love this love poem, Rick. Beautiful!
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Date: 12/20/2016 5:57:00 AM
I'm not sure her smile could make this love song any better or maybe it already has. Beautifully done Rick. This is one I can relate to.
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Date: 12/20/2016 1:42:00 AM
- Enjoy the romance of this poem, Rick ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2016 1:25:00 AM
Is it a song? Or becoming one? I love this cute little love poem :)
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Date: 12/19/2016 11:37:00 PM
The format and the emotions have brought out a beautiful bouquet ...
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Date: 12/19/2016 10:39:00 PM
Rick, cohesive with such good emotion. : )
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White Wolf
Date: 12/19/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thank you, Doug /|\
Date: 12/19/2016 7:28:00 PM
WoW! Rick, I loved your rhymes . They were soooo romantic.Good imagery as well. A song within a poem perhaps? Either way this is my kind of write.A without a doubt seven:-)Alexis
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Date: 12/19/2016 7:41:00 PM
Cheers, Alexis /|\

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