Reflecting Skies:

In the twilight Of her eyes, There was magic, Of reflecting skies, In the tenderness Of her touch, I find realism, O so much. And in her loving And soft voice, I fly to the heavens As I rejoice. As for her smile, It does belong, In every part Of my love song. /|\
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Walker Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Short and sweet..... and a real treat !!
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Thank you very much, Lenna /|\
Rycroft Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 2:01 PM
A lovely poem x poetry in motion x
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 5:39 PM
You created a lovely romantic poem here, Rick. Much enjoyed!
Godwin Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Perfectly sweet, Rick. I can see this as a beautiful love based greeting card with 'her' changed to 'you'. It would work beautifully and what woman wouldn't be happy to receive such admiration in such a lovely write ... CayCay
Wolf Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, CayCay /|\
Turner Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 10:13 AM
I absolutely love this love poem, Rick. Beautiful!
Green Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 5:57 AM
I'm not sure her smile could make this love song any better or maybe it already has. Beautifully done Rick. This is one I can relate to.
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 1:42 AM
- Enjoy the romance of this poem, Rick ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Is it a song? Or becoming one? I love this cute little love poem :)
Gupta Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 11:37 PM
The format and the emotions have brought out a beautiful bouquet ...
Vinson Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Rick, cohesive with such good emotion. : )
Wolf Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Thank you, Doug /|\
Y. Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 7:28 PM
WoW! Rick, I loved your rhymes . They were soooo romantic.Good imagery as well. A song within a poem perhaps? Either way this is my kind of write.A without a doubt seven:-)Alexis
Wolf Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 7:41 PM
Cheers, Alexis /|\
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