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Reflecting

I 
wonder
if poems
birthed from my soul
might be - like my days on this earth - numbered.

Days are fleeting, yet in the sky I see
infinity,
and so I
make a 
wish.

May
poems
reflect my
mind boundlessly
like those stars that illuminate the night.

7/19/2016

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Sara Kendrick

July 25, 2016 at 2:36 PM

Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Constance La France

July 23, 2016 at 8:20 PM

Andrea, this is so BEAUTIFUL a winner for sure and I am loving it 7 ~

Eve Roper

July 23, 2016 at 2:38 PM

Great write congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong

July 23, 2016 at 7:20 AM

Congratulations on your great number two placement Andrea! A wonderful reflection on poetry! 7 ; )

Liz Ward

July 23, 2016 at 12:18 AM

This is a great write. Congratulations. Best wishes, Liz

Janice Canerdy

July 22, 2016 at 11:35 PM

A 7 for this beautiful, winning poem, Andrea! Janice

Eve Roper

July 22, 2016 at 11:11 PM

Andrea, great poem, great out look for the last stanza, congratulations on your win :-)

Francis J Grasso

July 20, 2016 at 9:17 PM

My sister was cured 14 years ago. As always, she is unstoppable! ... As for running out of poems I feel that way every day. Sometimes, reading back what I wrote that day convinces me I have! I post it anyway!

Joyce Johnson

July 20, 2016 at 5:44 PM

I just read in the blogs about your breast cancer. I am amazed how you keep so many tasks going in your life. I have been having back trouble and it is a chore to try to keep going with the contests and I see how you just keep going with all of your various interests, chores and duties. My best to you. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

July 20, 2016 at 8:45 PM

thanks, Joyce, I have always been very energetic and I honestly feel NO different at all since I had cancer. Supposedly i am cancer free again and will just be doing radiation as safeguards. YOU are to be admired for how you keep going and going!!

Nette Onclaud

July 20, 2016 at 4:58 PM

stellar verse like no other, dear andie... you're a light!... huggs... soupie!

Daver Austin

July 20, 2016 at 4:27 PM

This one is right there, up among the stars. What can I say - this is just great! Keep well and make me happy. Love, daver

Laura Leiser

July 20, 2016 at 3:20 PM

Great reflective words in your poem, Andrea! Good luck in the contest:)

Michael Dom

July 20, 2016 at 12:53 PM

Likewise, Andrea. Long time no read :-)

Madhupriya Shanmugam

July 20, 2016 at 10:10 AM

Super:)

Wilma Neels

July 20, 2016 at 4:17 AM

Andrea, I love this. Love that your reflect on your musings. All the best for the contest with this beauty. :) I am doing good thanks, just cold over here. How are you doing?

Viv Wigley

July 19, 2016 at 11:31 PM

Though thy days be numbered and, by God's grace a long,long way off, your words will live on. A nice legacy, don't you think? Lovely piece, Andrea. Viv x

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 19, 2016 at 6:36 PM

Hi sweetie... wonderful musings over here, but yes I detect a tinge of sadness mixed in here (or maybe it's how I read it?) -- still very beautiful and I like how you likened your poems to stars-- they really do shine....