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'refining Process'

drops of rain pelt down 
sentiments floating downstream
embrace the showers…

saturated and shattered
refinement in process



Contest: Tanka me a dream
By         : Wilma N. Neels

3rd Place

Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/25/2011 10:38:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/25/2011 10:38:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 2/23/2011 1:50:00 PM Wilma my dear sweet friend, congrats on your win in my contest with this lovely write...love always Michael Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 2/23/2011 1:33:00 AM wow-- what a deep tanka-- really like what you say here, Missy :) Super happy this placed 3rd-- so super congrats to you :D & yup I hope you are having a great day :) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/22/2011 9:14:00 AM Congrats Wilma on your super win in the Dream Tanka contest with another amazing write my friend.. enjoy your top ten sweet victory with luv... Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/22/2011 8:07:00 AM Wonderful Tanka!Congrats Wilma on your win! Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/22/2011 8:02:00 AM Good to see you at the top again Wilma, Congratulations on your poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/21/2011 11:55:00 PM You must dream quite clearly. Congratulations on winning in Michael's contest with this entry. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/21/2011 11:02:00 PM wow, a really profound one too, Wilma. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/21/2011 10:03:00 PM Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Wilma. Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 2/21/2011 8:39:00 PM Wow. Many congratulations my dear friend. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 2/21/2011 5:42:00 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Michael, Wilma Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 2/21/2011 5:14:00 PM Congratulations on your third place win, I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/21/2011 4:20:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 2/21/2011 3:35:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Wilma. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/13/2011 6:52:00 AM Very thoughtful write from you Wilma---enjoyed----kashinath Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/13/2011 5:49:00 AM Regardint your question, that was not fiction at all. It flowed directly from my last encounter with a man. Love you, Carolyn Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 2/13/2011 5:46:00 AM Love the meaning behind your words Wilma, a most well written Tanka. Have a terrific Sunday....:) Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 2/13/2011 5:10:00 AM I think I am still awaiting refinement, Wilma. This is a great tanka. Best to you, Diane Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/13/2011 5:03:00 AM Those raindroplets change the world one drop at a time..Would be that our lives would change the world for good one life at a time..Yes, Rufus Hussey is on YouTube just type in Rufus Hussey on YouTube...Sara Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/13/2011 4:45:00 AM Refining our lives by allowing sentiments to float downstream with the rain truly can be a refinement process, Wilma. Sometimes I wish the rain could just wash away all our troubles. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply