Wilma Neels Poet Tanka

'refining Process'

drops of rain pelt down 
sentiments floating downstream
embrace the showers…

saturated and shattered
refinement in process



Contest: Tanka me a dream
By         : Wilma N. Neels

3rd Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 25, 2011 at 10:38 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown February 25, 2011 at 10:38 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico February 23, 2011 at 1:50 PM Wilma my dear sweet friend, congrats on your win in my contest with this lovely write...love always Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 23, 2011 at 1:33 AM wow-- what a deep tanka-- really like what you say here, Missy :) Super happy this placed 3rd-- so super congrats to you :D & yup I hope you are having a great day :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 22, 2011 at 9:14 AM Congrats Wilma on your super win in the Dream Tanka contest with another amazing write my friend.. enjoy your top ten sweet victory with luv...

Kash Poet February 22, 2011 at 8:07 AM Wonderful Tanka!Congrats Wilma on your win!

John Freeman February 22, 2011 at 8:02 AM Good to see you at the top again Wilma, Congratulations on your poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit February 21, 2011 at 11:55 PM You must dream quite clearly. Congratulations on winning in Michael's contest with this entry.

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2011 at 11:02 PM wow, a really profound one too, Wilma. Congrats on your win!

Audrey Haick February 21, 2011 at 10:03 PM Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Wilma. Love, Annalise

Tahera Mannan February 21, 2011 at 8:39 PM Wow. Many congratulations my dear friend.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 21, 2011 at 5:42 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Michael, Wilma

Caryl Muzzey February 21, 2011 at 5:14 PM Congratulations on your third place win, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Sara Kendrick February 21, 2011 at 4:20 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Joyce Johnson February 21, 2011 at 3:35 PM Congratulations on your win, Wilma. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet February 13, 2011 at 6:52 AM Very thoughtful write from you Wilma---enjoyed----kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire February 13, 2011 at 5:49 AM Regardint your question, that was not fiction at all. It flowed directly from my last encounter with a man. Love you, Carolyn

James Fraser February 13, 2011 at 5:46 AM Love the meaning behind your words Wilma, a most well written Tanka. Have a terrific Sunday....:)

Diane Locksley February 13, 2011 at 5:10 AM I think I am still awaiting refinement, Wilma. This is a great tanka. Best to you, Diane

Sara Kendrick February 13, 2011 at 5:03 AM Those raindroplets change the world one drop at a time..Would be that our lives would change the world for good one life at a time..Yes, Rufus Hussey is on YouTube just type in Rufus Hussey on YouTube...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire February 13, 2011 at 4:45 AM Refining our lives by allowing sentiments to float downstream with the rain truly can be a refinement process, Wilma. Sometimes I wish the rain could just wash away all our troubles. Love, Carolyn