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'refining Process'

drops of rain pelt down sentiments floating downstream embrace the showers… saturated and shattered refinement in process Contest: Tanka me a dream By : Wilma N. Neels 3rd Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/23/2011 1:50:00 PM

Wilma my dear sweet friend, congrats on your win in my contest with this lovely write...love always Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/23/2011 1:33:00 AM

wow-- what a deep tanka-- really like what you say here, Missy :) Super happy this placed 3rd-- so super congrats to you :D & yup I hope you are having a great day :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2011 9:14:00 AM

Congrats Wilma on your super win in the Dream Tanka contest with another amazing write my friend.. enjoy your top ten sweet victory with luv...

Kash Poet

Date: 2/22/2011 8:07:00 AM

Wonderful Tanka!Congrats Wilma on your win!

John Freeman

Date: 2/22/2011 8:02:00 AM

Good to see you at the top again Wilma, Congratulations on your poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/21/2011 11:55:00 PM

You must dream quite clearly. Congratulations on winning in Michael's contest with this entry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2011 11:02:00 PM

wow, a really profound one too, Wilma. Congrats on your win!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/21/2011 10:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Wilma. Love, Annalise

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/21/2011 8:39:00 PM

Wow. Many congratulations my dear friend.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2011 5:42:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Michael, Wilma

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/21/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your third place win, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2011 4:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/21/2011 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Wilma. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet

Date: 2/13/2011 6:52:00 AM

Very thoughtful write from you Wilma---enjoyed----kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2011 5:49:00 AM

Regardint your question, that was not fiction at all. It flowed directly from my last encounter with a man. Love you, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 2/13/2011 5:46:00 AM

Love the meaning behind your words Wilma, a most well written Tanka. Have a terrific Sunday....:)

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/13/2011 5:10:00 AM

I think I am still awaiting refinement, Wilma. This is a great tanka. Best to you, Diane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2011 5:03:00 AM

Those raindroplets change the world one drop at a time..Would be that our lives would change the world for good one life at a time..Yes, Rufus Hussey is on YouTube just type in Rufus Hussey on YouTube...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2011 4:45:00 AM

Refining our lives by allowing sentiments to float downstream with the rain truly can be a refinement process, Wilma. Sometimes I wish the rain could just wash away all our troubles. Love, Carolyn