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Refinement of My Vision

refinement of my vision — leaning oak, in midst of evergreen forest. though held captive, captivated by a simple grace. 8/19/2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/20/2020 5:05:00 PM

I like that 'captive, captivated...' sequence. Works for me in at least a couple of ways. How graceful the stately oak! Superb, Kim! Forestry and Fantasy, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/20/2020 4:01:00 PM

A single grace is often enough.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2020 6:45:00 PM

Yes!

John Watt

Date: 8/19/2020 10:14:00 AM

This is really nice! I love the metaphor of the leaning oak in the midst of all the evergreens. Nice contrast with "held captive" and "captivated by". A great ending with a simple grace ~ John

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2020 10:40:00 AM

Thank you, John! Thanks for a great comment.

Susan Woodrow

Date: 8/19/2020 7:30:00 AM

short eloquence! very nice :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2020 8:23:00 AM

Thank you, Susan!

Silent One

Date: 8/19/2020 6:50:00 AM

You captured the element very well..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2020 8:23:00 AM

Thank you, Silent!