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I’m so excited about this election about America and our direction We’ll trust old men to make big decisions elderly men of compassion and vision Men who were there when the work was done when we went to the moon and warred in Vietnam A glorious age is at hand we’ll be safe in those trembling hands One who launched a murderous insurrection* Another who can’t even follow simple directions They will grasp what needs to be done, our land will be free and efficiently run We’ll trust old men who think with precision to keep us safe with complex decisions Men who were there when the work was done promoting corporate advantage and environmental damage A glorious age is at hand we’ll be safe in those trembling hands I’m so excited about this election about America and our direction . . Officer, Brian D. Sicknick was murdered by rioters, beaten to death with a fire extinguisher. 113 other police officers were injured trying to protect our capital on January 6th, 2021.

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Date: 2/25/2024 8:23:00 AM
Bravo Anais, I love your perspective on our leaders. I'd still rather have the one who can't follow directions as you put it then the one who orders insurrections, now convicted for fraud and he will pay almost a billion! You're right how one is the President who can't get needed legislation passed, while the other pulls the strings on the side lines. I Am Anaya
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Date: 2/17/2024 1:53:00 PM
Dear Anais, Your poem is a thought-provoking reflection on the complexities of the upcoming election and the contrasting perspectives on leadership. Your juxtaposition of excitement and uncertainty captures the ambivalence many feel during such times of decision-making. The imagery you use portrays the dichotomy of trust and skepticism in the capabilities of those vying for power. I Loved Reading Your Poem. - Blessings, Daniel
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/17/2024 5:01:00 PM
I’m so glad - thanks for the thoughtful review ??
Date: 2/17/2024 12:37:00 PM
April 20. 2021. Washington (CNN) US Capitol Police Officer Brian Sicknick suffered strokes and died of natural causes one day after responding to the January 6 insurrection at the US Capitol, Washington DC's chief medical examiner has determined. The medical examiner, Francisco Diaz, didn't note any evidence that Sicknick had an allergic reaction to chemical spray or list any internal or external injuries, according to The Washington Post..."
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Date: 2/25/2024 8:08:00 AM
and additionally commented that "all that transpired played a role in his condition", a decision which was criticized by some expert neurologists, who have stated that stress from the attack may have very well caused the stroke! You are right Anais. Of course he was murdered. I Am Anaya
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Date: 2/17/2024 4:29:00 PM
I’ll have to re-check my sources - see, I wasn’t actually there. Any chance that stopping a violent attempt to overthrow an election could have been a stressor, a contributor to the strokes? I think I also read that there were 4 or more rioters who suffered heart attacks around the event (apparently, heart-wise, insurrection is a young man’s game). But, I see that my research can be faulty.

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