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Red-Hot

Black satin sheets shimmering,
Piercing eyes, red-hot passion.
Realities from dreamland –
Vanished at yawning.

© February 2, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

fantasypassiondodoitsu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2011 at 11:53 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

February 6, 2011 at 5:46 AM

A well deserved win with this romantic and witty write..so enjoyed...luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2011 at 10:09 AM

ooh la la and then the fantasy is gone! and also you could say vanished at dawning. heehee. LOVE it. Congratulations!

Joyce Johnson

February 4, 2011 at 5:20 PM

Surprising ending. Well done and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 5:16 PM

Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.

Kory Calhoun

February 4, 2011 at 3:07 PM

Hi Dane Ann - Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

February 4, 2011 at 1:14 PM

Congrats Dane on another big win!Enjoyed your Dodoitsu---kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

February 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM

Dane Ann, HAAA, this is too funny! Congratulations on your win, this is fantastic! Lov, Shar

James Fraser

February 4, 2011 at 10:43 AM

We just have to turn these dreams to realities. Dreamy poetry at it's best Dane Ann. Many congrats on your win....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 10:06 AM

Wonderful image, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2011 at 8:10 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy another chart topping sweet success with luv..

John Freeman

February 4, 2011 at 6:18 AM

Dane , great to see in the top 5, my friend. Enjoy! Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

February 4, 2011 at 1:38 AM

dane!! so lovely.. thumbs up for the big win in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

February 3, 2011 at 11:31 PM

congrats Dane Ann on your 4th place win in my contest, love it

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 3, 2011 at 1:13 PM

Nice humor particularly the last line vanished at yawning, dane

Jimmy Anderson

February 3, 2011 at 12:09 PM

Very cute poem Dane Ann...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

February 3, 2011 at 9:36 AM

i fell it as great! though i can not give an explicit explanation. great formation. love, lightning ink.

Daver Austin

February 3, 2011 at 7:15 AM

Some can be so hot, so bothering, that one is relieved to wake up. A short, very revealing piece. Love, Dave

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2011 at 11:22 PM

hahaha, funny one with passion. Dane Ann, from this writing, I'm surprised Black swan shocked you.hahaha. YOu are like my mom. she gets shocked by things too. NOt me though. Yes,I bellydanced one year and got to even do it once at a restaruant. Too bad I put on ten pounds since then. haha. LUv, Andrea

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